Hmm. It certainly seems that Malcolm has some thinking to do - let's hope that last hammer-blow from Trip will tip the scales in the right direction!

'Cuddling', eh? Or should that be 'coddling'...? Very Freudian slip from Malcolm, there!

Trip, you're such a tease! :D

'Break it to him gently'? I think they should sedate him!

Thank Heaven for Malcolm's quick thinking!

I love your character! She is just awesome and i love the way you write Reed and Trip.

Thank you so much for your stories! I love the reality you have crafted.

Very good Malcom story. Would you consider doing one with a little more Archer and Hoshi? They are my favorite.

Next chapter!

This is a good story. I like Jean, but I also like Hoshi.

Anyway, chapters 4 and 5 seem to be repetitive. I do that when I get tired and forget where I am.

But, Malcom needs to be kind to a woman.