^_^ i LOVE Memoirs of a Geisha. i look forward to the next chap.

Hi, just found your fic! Love the plot, really do appreciate the time that an author spends to really bring life to a plot that has one of the main Naruto characters as a geisha or maiko. Love your story, please complete it!? If you do a search on the site, you'll find that hardly anyone finishes a geisha/maiko story for Naruto...*sniff*

I read your story yesterday, but I wasn't able to leave a review due to internet problems.

Anyway, I loved the prologue, and how you set up your characters -- particularly Naruto as a geisha and Sasuke, as an "anti-geisha" person. Both were relatively in character in how you set up your story, and I loved it very much. Without saying anything a lot, Sasuke's temperament was well understood, and when he said, "You, what was your name?" it just proved that Sasuke wasn't even paying geisha-Naruto any attention otherwise he wouldn't ask his name again.

And Naruto feeling uncertain to Sasuke's behavior was perfect and how he tried to please him as well as to remove the tension between them by asking "Would like some more sake, Sir?" was just as fit. After all, this is Naruto's first night, and he already gotten a customer who doesn't like geisha as a general.

General and overall setting was an amalgamation between joyous hustle-bustle and vibrant since people and geisha were busy alike since Orochimaru was present, and somewhat lonely-ful and somber -- the scene between Sasuke and Naruto. But as overall, the whole chapter was nice to read, and I could imagine the scene that you were trying to portray in my mind.

However, the scene with Iruka I wasn't that pleased in the sense I didn't like how she was all apologetic and all, but I assume that she is an experienced geisha, and she was trying her best to not make her customer angry or upset. About Orochimaru, will he try to gain Naruto's affections by manipulation and force since you're making him a pervert high-class man with "disturbing interest in young boys."

But as I said, the overall chapter was nice to read. I would to read the future chapters. 8.5/10

10. 24. 08

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