For some reason your epilogue doesn't seem like an epilogue to me, it seems as if though it's the start of a new story. I hope you write a sequel to this story.

What is with the guys giggling? Guys chuckle, girls giggle; so every time you said they giggled it sounded so gay.

awwwwww what a happy ending!

i love the 3 way proposal! (that sounds a little dirty hahaha
it was really sweet and i love that they all did it at the same time.

well done! i really enjoyed it and for a first fanfic im impressed. ive read a few first that werent too great but this was fantastic!

WTF! i cant believe that actually just happened...i knida expected some sort of confrontation but its still hard to deal with. stupid melanie bitch, i wonder if she ever got a chance to talk to oiur edward? and i wonder if she somehow was the one to bring jacob to town. stupid son of a bitch. i will never understand anyone that hits the person they claim to love. idiots!

great chapter, im sad its coming to a close :S

ummm so yeah that was HOT!

i think im still blushing hahahaha

UGH! when melanie showed up i literally swore for like 2 minutes straight, im glad im home alone hahaha

why didnt edward go after her? im guessing that emmett was the one that found her.

DAMN IT! everything was going so well

oh no! what happened to her? the date started off so well and then it all fell apart
i smell trouble coming from melanie...stupid city girl hahha

alright, im sticking to my guess but im starting to doubt it. i want to know who this Ji- is.

edward was so the mystery presence at the end.

oh dear, for all her confidence she seems very insecure.

im looking forward to seeing where this goes

What the F is going on?

when james grabbed her arm i was all like "OH NO HE DIDN'! hahahaha jerk!

im going to take a stab in the dark and guess that bella's old boyfriend was abusive b/c she was shocked that edward was taking care of her...i could be wrong

man, i was going to go to sleep but now i HAVE to read another chapter)

great first 2 chapters! im very intrigued on where this is going. i love a confident bella

i wonder what makes bella's heart broken. there is more to them then there appears
cant wait to keep reading

awwww they got their happy ending. loved it sad its finished

excellent!

oh my hero

Hot B&E sex

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm