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Lightning-Strike
2002-08-21 . chapter 20
Sorry for not reviewing sooner, it wouldn't let me review the first time I tried, and then it slipped my mind...

That's it!? DARN!!! That was good...I feel really sorry for Gary, if anything...

Lights: Get over it. He's always been an egotistical jerk and that'll never change.

Kasumi: Furrrr?

LS: Watch your mouth, Lights!! *pets Kasumi the Furret* You wouldn't know, darling, you haven't seen the anime. But this isn't your average story!! Gary was pretty cool. I liked him.

Lights: You're insane. He's never gonna change--!! *is suddenly bound and gagged*

LS: That'll teach ya. *sticks her tongue out at the Raichu* Well, I guess I'll have to live with this as the end. *sob* Great story!!
Dragoness
2002-04-15 . chapter 20
Eeeeeeeee............eeee..........ummmmmmmm....Ee? Gah, must speak intelligibly...okay okay...need to go electric. *^_^*;;; Uhhh...Eee? I can't...think...gah...ummm...That was cool...Hmm...You know, I was thinking about that catching idea for a while but I just dismissed it cuz Ash wouldn't let himself get caught...Heh...Well...Hmmm...Weird how Professor Oak came up with that idea...or maybe he just really did understand what happened...Well...Hmmm...Nice, nice fic...I...really can't think of anything else...I'm kinda in a daze right now. Heh..well..Tat's all.. *^_^*
Dragoness
2002-04-15 . chapter 19
Eeeeeeee...I can't believe I missed this when it came out!! *o_O*;;; Wah! Sooo...action-ous...if that's a word. Good fight! Bwa! Somehow I knew Ash was gonna pull something like that...Hee...Gwah I must...go look at the epilogue...uhh...Yeee! *^_^*;;;
IceVector
2002-04-15 . chapter 20
i loved this fan fic was great just hope you want to make a sequel

**wakes up** huh? how long did i sleep?

huh... a century or 2?

oh goodnight....

anyways im sure if you write one itll be good
Alex Warlorn
2002-04-14 . chapter 20
“Ash what happened to you!”
how can he tell them apart?
Only my mom and your grandfather know the full truth.
Poor May.
He changed back into a mew and levitated his wet coat on to the side.
So he was in 'flasher style'?
It wasn't much of a climax, life doesn't have climaxes though. New part? If you can learn from your mistakes and give us a new spin on this. OWho knows? Do what you feel inspired to do. Always finnish what you start.
BTW: Thank you for always reviewing my stuff.
Lightning-Strike
2002-04-03 . chapter 19
SWEET BATTLE!!! I'm happy now! Jeez, what's gonna happen to Gary? He's been captured! By his own friend! Ohh, do tell, what happens in a year? I hate not knowing...
IceVector
2002-04-02 . chapter 19
im sure their gonna have a ** off Gary when he comes out heh =)

but if Gary is the darkness part how is he gonna be alright heh?

i juss hope he returns to normal
Alex Warlorn
2002-04-02 . chapter 19
If Gary comes out of there he's going to be mad, and he has to come out of there sooner or later. Leaving him in there for all eturnity would be too cruel.
And Ash and didn't eveolve at the EXACT same time did they?
Alex Warlorn
2002-03-30 . chapter 18
Well, things sure have degenerated into chaos, I wonder if anyone will be left alive when this is all over.
Lightning-Strike
2002-03-30 . chapter 18
COOL!!! Why do so many people think Giovanni is Ash's dad? Has that been proven? I'm just curious. Oh, this is COOL!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! The last Mew...ooooohhhhhh...
Dragoness
2002-03-29 . chapter 18
Ah-ah-ah-ahhhh!! The plot thickens. Geez, it started to get tense there at the end...and um...*pause for a moment* Sorry, I got distracted. *>_<*; Just to let you know that my train of thought got derailed...Now where were we...? Oh yeah...Gary and Ash and Mewtwo and Giovanni and stuff. Bwah..I need to put more coals in the engine...Er, my train of thought I mean. *^_^*;;; Umm...Well Gary is once again scaring me...Can't wait to see how this plays out, ne? *^_^*; And um...Oh yeah, I'm not mad at you for making it like EC. I was kinda expecting that...*^_^*;; Oh yeah! The return of the weird shower thingy! Lol, I have no idea where I came up with that, but it works, ne? *^_^*;; Ah...and...I...should stop now cuz I can't think anymore...*blinks* Whoa, that last line in the 2nd to last paragraph...Didn't pick up on it before...Is Gary gonna...do something evil? *gulps* *o_O*;; Ummm...Well...I guess we'll just have to wait and see...ahh...um...I give up, my mind doesn't wanna work anymore. Tat's all! *^_^*;
Dragoness
2002-03-25 . chapter 17
you know what? I reviewed this, I really did. A LONG time ago...but my review still hasn't come through! How sad. :/ Well...Just letting you know I read it...I have no idea what I wrote last time and I'm too lazy to figure it out so...Tat's all *^_^*;
Lightning-Strike
2002-03-15 . chapter 17
I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!! GIVE ME THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Oh, this is good! Poor Gary, he feels like he's inept since he can't stay in human form as long as Ash, and now he's getting bashed by Mewtwo! Of course, Ash was stupid enough to get caught by Giovanni, but that's beside the point. Oh, this is a good story! PLEASE give me more, PLEASE!!
Alex Warlorn
2002-03-14 . chapter 17
Gary just instantly knows who and what MEwtwo is, that's cheap.

Also no Mew have eveloved for centuries, how old IS Holly?

Ash had just been though an ordeal by Giovanni. Apparently some one told him about Ash’s evolution and he captured the boy.

Who?!

Well, MewTwo still played out his role as the dark Mew, even if he was short on que.

Okay, I'm confused, I think all the fan characters are muddying the story.

The only reason I know Neikero(sp) is is because I've read Dragoness' story.
Alex Warlorn
2002-03-08 . chapter 16
BOTH of them, if your going by Dragoness' cannon, your making evelotion way too easy. (look at Sabrina and all the power she has and still hasn't eveloved) Also, the darkness is going to want one of them. Also, Ash's orginal plan to avoid the emergence of the dark Mew just got skrewed. (
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