ill tell you what i think.

i think your really off your rockers! lol

i don't know why you decided to make remus a traitor, but i liked it, it changed from ordinary peter bashing.

This is great! I really like it :) So much description and emotion, you really are a talented writer :)

-HermyCaz x

i like this side of sirius hehe it's fantastic, like don't get me wrong i love happy sirius but a dark, twisted sirius is soo much better :D

Very stirring and emotional writing. I can easily see this side of Sirius. I found this very interesting:

For the first time since he left Number 12 Grimmauld Place, he wished he hadn’t. He wished he could crawl into his mother’s bed, and have her hold him until they burning pain went away.

this is wonderful. You did a fantastic job of showing how broken and vulnerable Sirius would be at this point, thinking Remus was a traitor and knowing his brother was dead.

Good work. This was a beautifully dark story.

You know...I am supposed to eb on hiatus...

BUT THIS JUST KILLED ME!


*sobs*

why are you such a good writer? a good dark sirius writer?

*sobs more*


I loved this

*sniffles*

(and by the way( I saw that Harry/Hermione=least favorite ship on your profile...I just had to crack up)

Fantastic.

I liked this one-shot! I think you portrayed loneliness in quite a powerful way, and I was in shock during the beating :P Kee on writing, you have a nice style!

Cheers,
Charlie