I've got tears in my eyes. This is amazing!!

Awe. Very good. I’m not normally a Will/Elizabeth fan, but this was worth reading.

Oh my god, that was gorgeous. I shy away from the PotC fandom, but this was awesome. It sounds very much like Elizabeth and I love how you actually kept the Elizabeth/Will pairing.

I got her point...Would you like me to tell you? ;)

This was lovely and poignant. You did a wonderful job conveying the unwelcome surprise Elizabeth has when she finally feels time catching up with her.

I love the way you wrote the turmoil she experiences about his latest return, fretting that he'll be disappointed even as she tries to remain steadfast in her conviction that Will would love her no matter what.

And of course, he does.

Nicely written! I enjoyed reading this a great deal.
Cheers!
Nytd