i've never read a fanfic like this...and it impresses the heck out of me

ah =3

love your style

That was awesome!

awe so sweet

aw, gentle and touching (wow i sound sap-ish)

You are an amazing writer! i love this story and hope that you write more, fantatsic, fluff pieces like this! well done and keep it up! emma...x

This is so cute! I really really like this! Dispite the sadness, I found this story VERY touching!
You are truly a great writer!

great, it's so great, other than these words and the next, i'm speechless.

So fluffy :)
I really like this. Quite well written.

Interesting how conversations can turn towards such... out of the way topics. *wink*

Cute!

I love this story. It shows a lot of emotion. Keep on writing:)

Amazing story. I Love it.

I LOVED this one! Great job!

This was beautiful, Nisha!

I hadn't gotten around to reading it yet, but I'm really not sure whether or not I like this or the lollipops better. This was so sweet! And I just love the way Holly kind of... took something that was very solemn and serious and poetic and made it just sexy enough to distract our Artemis (and me) for a second, but then it got back onto its sweet and wonderfully well-written dramatic self.

...I'm writing this when I'm a bit sleepy, but good job and this is gorgeous!