I actually cried at the end of this... When I think about it, these two do seem more romantic than Pein and Konan. I say make an entirely different fanfic using them as a couple, so you'll have one comic side like you've been doing before and you'll have a more serious side like this one. Flee could be like...the summary of the whole thing before going into full detail about how the members died, what happened to cause all this, what made Konan and Kakuzu fall for each other, etc.

OMG...so beautiful...TT-TT I love it!

... How could you? D,:

I've never really thought about making Kakuzu and Konan a couple, but I think now it's one of my favorite pairings.

So sad! I don't know if it's short because you wanted it to be, or because you just didn't feel like writing, but this would make an awesome multi-chapter story.

Why?! Why did you kill them!? D,x

O.O When did you write this? I never saw it in my emails...

But GOD, Jen! The end made me giggle. It was like, "This isn't Kakuzu and Hidan, so I'm not gonna write anything graphic." *giggles* And then it was like all ended, and I was like "WHAT?" and checked. It's done. *cocks head* So, I have to say, that was a strange ending. But aw~ *huggles romantic stuffs* So cute.

Plus I'm happy that I know her name again. Konan... *shrugs* Not such a big deal, but w'ever.

this made me cry

kaku/konan? I've never heard of this pairing Jen. What an interesting pairing indeed...

I LOVE KakuzuxKonan and I loved this. It was so sad in the end... beautiful work. There isnt enough KakuzuxKonan in this world... I wrote a KakuzuxKonan oneshot if you wanna check it out ^.^

Awuu~ I really loved it, Jen. Great job!

Ah...

Pein that invincible possessive megalomaniac bastard.

Interesting.

^-^~ How ever it was a bit to... Sketchy for me dorry. I'd have perfered if the beginning was a bit more substantial you know the whole, "I don't know." Got me a bit ruffled. But I like the ending. Not the whole everyone dies romeo and juliet style but it's good structuring...

Hm, this pairing could work~

JJ

nice story, is this going to keep going? cause i like this alot

its good. you did a major gamble by writing a story with a cgaracter thats less popular thus less reviews. but its good