i liked this one-shot! i hope you will continue to write more like it!

-luna

Awesome!! This is inspiring me to make the ending of my story similar to this

it rocks!!

It's a really well wrote story. I also enjoyed the game a lot as well and your story is a cool ending from the real spyro ending. I hope they make another legend of spyro game to continue this on, but another website said their making a film of the legend of spyro games, so I can't wait! Awesome story, maybe you should write another!!

Great one-shot! I've recently completed Dawn of the Dragon, near 100%, and it's quite enjoyable. You got the scene perfectly right, and the characters in their respective characters. This is probably a fic I'll remember for a while, 'cause the ending impact is quite strong...and it leaves me burning for more. Keep up the good work!

~ADarknessInHeaven
aka: Sam

very good short story here, it fits nicely with the game. i wish they would make another game with a new adventure featuring Spyro and Cynder but i dont think they will...lol anyways well dont very enjoyable ending

I loved it. I personally think there was nothing wrong with it at all. It's well formed,and very discriptive. You're a very literate story writer!
I hope to see more stories from you!

Oh my God! I finished playing Dawn of the Dragon and the last two videos made me cry. Cynder finally saying she loved Spyro as he used all of his power to fix the Earth and Ignitus finally becoming the new Chronicler. It was so touching. A shame it is to think that this is may be the end of the Spyro games.

your right about that the game was awesome but iv'e got to say i don't have eternal night(not for lack of trying to get it) and iv'e got the crappy ds version of new begging so i can't really speak from experince since the portable ones are always crappy i've played just about every other one though none have the new heal and breath bar still great story makes you feel good iniside at least it makes me feel good inside don't know about the rest of you but still great story

This was a touching story*sniff* brings tears to my eyes*sniffs and grabs a tissue* very good story

aw! that was a truly good story.

not bad thi is a realy good story but the bad thing is for me i can't get dawn of the dragon till christmas T-T anyway keep up the good work

I agree the game was awesome! I loved it and I hope they make a continuation.

This story is great with a lot of passion in every word as it speaks every moment in a way that places you there, either as an observer or the characters themselves. You did an awesome job!

Even though your story was great I feel I should point out that reptils dont mate, the females lay eggs and the male fertilze them, I assume this is the same for dragons.

Beautiful! Very well written. It gives a great ending to the story. This is by far your masterpiece!