I loved this, it's a shame it never got a sequel. Still, it's very well done and I enjoyed it quite a bit.

That was great! Not only was it very well-written, but it had a surprise ending. Not to mention the "bonding ceremony" and the ASOE's twisted version of the wedding vows. That was hilarious! Hehehe... the whole idea of the ASOE making Mumm-Ra get married was really amusing. All in all, I'd say this is a pretty good story.

Ooh, freaky! I can't wait for the sequel!

For some odd reason I like the idea on Alluro being setimental about at least one thing.

That was excellent! Please keep writing. I loved the way that the storyline was well thought out and very detailed. It left room for a sequel too which I hope you'll write. Congrats Cheezey on a great fic.

That was great! It did feel much more detailed than the version I read on your website. Great job, keep writin'!