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blklover
2009-11-10 . chapter 12
great story please keep up the good work I hope to find out what happens next please update soon
On Emmett's team
2009-10-30 . chapter 12
Awesome story! update soon!
ladysavay
2009-10-28 . chapter 12
I'm so very interested in what ever may have gone on at The Burrow between Arthur, Molly, Ron and Ginny that night. I'm really hoping that in the next chapter we can read the scene of Arthur's anger, outrage and dissapointment in his wife and his two youngest. As the head of house and the one who KNOWS exactly what the life debt entails it would be imperitive that he make thier posiitons and actions in future CRYSTAL clear to them. I would really love to see mild mannered Arthur totally go ballistic on his wife, the dommineering shrew, and his two stupid and spoiled kids, just once. It NEVER happens in canon, so it would be great to see him really put them in thier places as the Head of the Family, using, if need be, any kind of family magic to compell them to do what he says for a change. They so deserve it and you would write it brilliantly, I'm sure.
Jaded Jagged
2009-10-20 . chapter 12
I really like this story and what you did with Hermione's family!
Sharptooth
2009-10-18 . chapter 12
Well, I have been reading and following your fic "After Sunrise", and I finally decided to give this on a try. I'm happy to say that I'm really glad I did. The story telling is top rate, and the new characters are wonderful. The fact that I have a daughter named Gwendolyn made it sweet for me.

I too have grown rather dissatisfied with Ron. He started out as my favorite character, and I forgave him time and time again, but his actions in HBP and DH made me very upset with him and his family.

I don't know, but to me it felt like someone else wrote the last two books. Thank you for bringing back the fell of the first five books to me.

Sharptooth
lorelover
2009-10-04 . chapter 12
Just want to tell you , I think your doing a great job on this story.
brigrove
2009-10-02 . chapter 8
oops confession time. I've actually got the DVD for Chitty Chitty Bang Bang!
NorthernLights25
2009-09-25 . chapter 12
Please update soon!
Hannah42992
2009-09-10 . chapter 12
i LOVE the story so far. i love that harry and hermione were fated and got married/ bonded. it was so romantic. its awful to think that ginny ron and molly would use love potions on harry and hermione but i can so totally see them doing it...their characters see the most likely to do it. one thing i can't stand in any story is umbitch...opps sorry...umbridge getting into the school. she will run it into the ground. hopefully once harry and his family takes care of business they can deal with her. ^_^ how far will harry and hermione go with their relationship? will harry and his family find and destroy the horcruxes? what will happen the the rest of the weasleys? FANTASTIC JOB...please continue with it...=)
old-crow
2009-08-23 . chapter 12
Hi,

This is a delightful story. It took me a little while to remember who was related to who, but now that that is cleared up, it has been very enjoyable.

I do have a question that I've been wondering about - If Harry owns the castle, why is toad allowed to step one foot inside?

Inquiring minds want to know.

O-C
old-crow
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Hi,

This is a good first chapter. You explained your break from canon and have set a good pace for your story.

Old-Crow
sandiprudhomme
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
please continue
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-07-18 . chapter 4
I love it!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-07-17 . chapter 3
I love it!
Jessalynvix
2009-07-12 . chapter 12
Oh my Ron, Ginny and Molly are lucky they are still alive. I like that Hermione is related to Minnie. Hm so Richard is more then likely a wizard if he was on the name list how strange he does seem to be rather smart about many things.
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