very good story...heartbreaking!

gah! that was heartbreaking!

That was a great story! Good job! Loved it!

Oh, poor poor Edward, what a stupid decision he made to lie to himself like that... he always loved her. Great work!

Emma

aw... that was so sad!
i think i actually had a tear
and i like how u put some humor in it
when edward said "hmm... tempting"