Hahahahaha! so funny

*snorts* Oh God, poor Ryan... How *did* he manage to keep sane with those two always flir-urm... "bickering". *snickers* I liked it...

One problem.

You, uh, asked everyone but me! *rolls her eyes* Stupid bish. *is just kidding, frolicks about* All will be forgiven if you take me to Best Buy. Or give me a lolli. A BlOoOOOOOO lolli. _ I'm still hyper from before... Oh, anyone reading this: The Next chapter of Aloha, Hawaii is up, and it's fun! _ Go read it!

Those screen names! LOL! I loved the screen names! Psychogeneral307 and sexytrench... *snicker*

Bwaaa Haaa Haaa! This story is so ridiculous it's *hysterical*! Jane and Neil's bickering was priceless (poor Ryan!) and I especially loved the IM session! (At first I though "Psychogeneral" was Hein. Must just be Major Elliot's wishful thinking! "Sexytrench" was the best!
Do you have any more up your sleeve? This is very funny!

Well, I'm pleasantly surprised; I didn't think that this was going to be continued.

Well done.

Very cute and funny please continue

lol that was werid yet funny.. what did dey read? O.o?¿

LOL-What an evil fic! Wonder what Jane and Neil read...

LOL! They read a naughty fic on FFnet about them? Too funny! I enjoyed this fic!

weird.. but cool..

9_9 Okay... that was quite interesting. But cute. I liked it. Now where's my lollipop?

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I fell off my chair laughing! go on go on!

Cute. I'd love to read the story Jane and Neil were reading online, though... LOL!

! Very funny1

Keep writing! Bye!