poor Katrina

I see why he's such an Emo. Darn Zexy! -slaps
Awesome as always.

(mouth hangs open in disbelief) Ohmygosh...

How...

sad...

It was good, though! I really liked how you switched between Zexion and Ienzo's perspectives. (sniffle) That really was good!

khgirl1770

Normally Im anti Oc/Canon but I was wondering how it came out because I think you can become a pretty awsome writer. ... NO IM NOT A STALKER.
Ha Ha.. Anyways, mainly that it was Ienzo brought it down a bit and I sat through it. The last line was awsome, "The pain from the slap never faded." And cleaned it up nicely.
But I must ask why your lacking spaces between worda everywhere o.o Is that just FF not copying it right?

Keep on writing, and I'll keep on sta- er, wat- er, amusing myself with your stories. ;D