Oh boy, I just love the trio as teenage brothers! so much fun.

This entire 'kitty' scene? Made me laugh. I can totally picture Kadaj chasing a poor cat.
Step 1: Fix the hair, which pretty much meant giving it a single nice toss.
Hahahaha, nice one :D Oh, Yazoo. I love how you characterized him in general, like a big brother, taking care of everyone. Kadaj really sounds like a stubborn teenager boy. Jenova's plain mean, though."Is Big-chest as nice as 'Neesan was?
Cloud frowned. "Who's 'Big-chest'?"Your girlfriend, moron.
You just made my day! And when he tried being nice by saying Cloud's spiky hair is cute, hahahaha xD
Nothing much to say, I guess. In overall, an awesome piece of work. Very sweet! I adore the happy ending (ohmygowshhh Ao-Chan! x3
Great job! :D

Great job! I absolutely LOVED this fanfic! And the ending, hilarious! That was clearly, AMAZING!

XD This deserves a lot more reviews!:huggles Sephy and Kadaj::

Such awesome crack. So funny! Thanks!

I can see why'd you be proud of this. It was so long and so wonderful. I loved Kadaj by the end of it. (O.o wow, Didn't think I'd ever say that.
But just so y'know, you have many fantastic stories besides this one."Yazoo", we spell like it sounds. -scrolls up- You spelled her name Aeris...oh my gosh... THANK YOU! -glomps you and gives you truckload of cookies- thankyouthankyouthankyou! XD

that was amazing, Sephiroth and Jenova made me want to punch them! but it was a happy ending after all, and Kadaj jumping after his kitty was adorable, i would of done that too.

I know very little about FFVII, apart from the movie, but your story answered a very important question for me."Jenova's children inherited genes that gave them silky, tangle-resistant hair, even in the midst of intense battle sequences
Ah...so that's how they do it!

Seriously though, your story was a riot to read."He did not even bat an eyelid when the plane exploded behind him, wreathing him in flames as he made his approach." Yep, that sounds a lot like Sephiroth. If nothing else, he does has a sense of the dramatic. I love the understated humor in your descriptions. Plus, it has a kitty. I was hooked the moment Kadaj saw the kitty. Kadaj's attempts to be nice like Aeris had me rolling on the floor with laughter"Your spiky hair is cute"!
The ending was nice too, reuniting the brothers and rounding out the story with a surprise visit from Ao-chan. I liked it a bunch!

Kitty! I don't blame Kadaj for wanting to catch the kitty, I'd be after it too.

Thanks for mentioning that my fic got the cogs turning, i might even get a couple more readers because of it
I think that Kadaj's feelings are well guessed and well displayed. I actually felt bad for Kadaj, that's not normal for me. I guess what I'm trying to say is job well done. And yeah, Loz WOULD drop out XD So typical of him. I like Tifa's nickname too.

Sephiroth was fun too, and his world take-over debts really must ruin Kadaj's life... But at least he has one of the coolest motorcycles ever made! I really don't have any criticism for it, but with my mind I see a future in which Kadaj finally kills Sephiroth...
Ah well, thanks for posting this story, I liked it a lot.

Oh jeez, this is hilarious. Seriously, you must write more.

oh my god...that was absolutely /hilarious/! every time that cat came in, i nearly died laughing! and just the interactions between Kadaj and his brothers, and Seph and Jenova, those were the BEST! i especially love how it was sorta AU-ish, but not really...that was brilliant... and, jeez, Seph's entrance, genius.

amazing. that's all i can say/amazing/. loved it. :D