That is very scary. Poor Blue, but it happens a lot. And Evelyn was a bit wrong, really...

Bluestreak should be happy it wasn't a schunk. No amount of washing, perfuming, or even tomato sauce would get that out of a car.

I should know, and had been so lucky.

A fan,
Pablum

If your muse is back I hope its planning on putting you to work on Jux! Its a good story and you need to keep working on it.

Hey! good to know your still around and...well, kickin?
oh well. So, this is the future side huh?...
*squels* so, they did make it! and whats best, there still
around. But, I would be lyin if I told ya I haven't been
hopin for evelyn to stay aboard the ship. To spend many
more merry days with the crew and...well, never grow old?
hahahaha, silly huh?

...Good to know that sideswipes finally got his
body back and sunstreaker, well, somehow in my POV
his 'warming' up to evelyn. Nyc! :)

I'm just getting caught up on my ficcies and reviews, and this continues to be one of the best ficcies out there (I love how your one shots tie into the bigger story too!) Poor Bluestreak on a really bad day, and Evy telling Sunstreaker what to do for the win =)

Yeah! You're back! And horra for muse, random though it may be!

Poor fox. ...Now just imagine the reaction if Evelyn ever caught a cold. On second thought, maybe that's a bad idea. I can already hear Ratchet screaming...

More good things like this please?

poor fox. but you do what you have to.

so glad to hear from you again, and i can't wait to see more!!

Hey Mate!

SO good to see you back! Glad the muse is biting again, even i she does insist on being random! This was kinda sad but i guess rabies is a nasty thing in the USA. We are lucky not to have it in Aussie so it always suprises me when i visit the USA and people are so wary of wild animals etc.

Nice work here though but it DOES make me want to read the ending of jux! hehe

Oh my goodness! You're back in action! I can't believe it. I thought I died (well, actually, no, or else I wouldn't be giving this to you.)

Oh no! Poor Bluestreak. That's probably going to haunt him for the rest of his days now. Killing a fox. . . Has this ever happened to you? Because most foxes I know like to steer clear of the roads.

Aw. Shitst-I mean Sunstreaker actually listened to Evy for once.

Suffer, you yellow abomination, suffer!

(lulz)

Amazing! I can't wait for more on your stories! *gives you internet cake*

Oh, wow.

I'm so glad you're back and updating. It's such a pleasure to read what you've produced. I love it, even though it's sad. I've had that happen once before, practically word-for-word with my dad when we hit a fox near our ranch.

Very realistic, very nicely written, and awesome as always.

I seriously can't wait to see what else you've got.

Cheers,
Figs

I can definitely feel for Bluestreak. I'd be feeling just as bad if I had hit something with my car.

...Unless it was my brother. >.>;

Why don't you update Transformers: Juxtaposition? Are you just going to discontinue that story?

Welcome back, muse. :)
Evelyn has good sense. I liked this scene/idea. Its a bit darker, in a way. Organic life isn't all roses. :)

Aww, poor Blue. He gets to have his fender bleached, huh? (And let me just ask... precisely how did Jazz end up in the river the week before Sideswipe got tagged by a cruiser?) I really enjoy how you write the mechs. There's a taste here of daily life within the Sideswipe/Sunstreaker bond, and hey, me likee. More, please!

It's great to see another chapter on one of your stories, so welcome back! (And any chance of an earthbound Ratchet sometime soon, huh, maybe? ;)

Poor Blue.