i like this one even more.Troy and Chad, never would have tought. i like it. good job!

I've never read a HSM story before, but I just saw the 3rd one yesterday and wanted to find some Troy/Chad slash.
This was far better than I expected to stumble upon.
I love the way you write, love the 2nd person perspective.
You actually gave a lot of substance to something that I think is rather lacking.
Good job, I really enjoyed this. (I've always been a sucker for angst)

Wow... That was... harsh and heart-breaking. And it feels like it really, really REALLY is true.
I love your writing! Really, it takes you and keeps you hanging, and there is rythm, there really is some rythm...
Wow...

Keep on writing!!
X~X~X Celia ~~

I loved it. It was short but it didn't feel like it should be longer - you crammed it all in perfectly! You have an unusual writing style and I look forward to more!

That was pretty hardcore. Emotionally, I mean. I really like the way you portray second place, left behind Chad, and I was nice to see him get a little vindictive glory here. You also did very well with the second person POV. Nice job.

~Ani

I love this. the ending is perfect, wonderful, and all those other praising words.