Poor Veronica and Logan, would they have been able to overcome the shadow of distrust hanging over them? This is thought provoking and well done, thanks for sharing.

Interesting take on the ripple effect. Perfect length too.

I've also read this before and never left a review...very beautifully wrtitten...as always :-)

Beautifully written.

A good start to a long and prolific career.

Why was this updated twice with single words? Strange

I've read this story before but I realize I never left a reviewed. Good story, as usual coming from you. The angst was nice but it's just sad.

Oh, btw, I hope we'll see a new chapter for Playing Hide and Seek... I really miss that VM universe. Please please please update that story. )

Wow this is really great! In my world, Veronica and Logan both do some growing up and live happily-ever-after but this story is a little more believable. I thought your use of repetition in the headline, as you added more details to the story was really great. Off to read your other works!

Wow.

Great story. Angst. Just the right way. The whole idea that one little choice can change your life so dramatic it is a really interesting and cuts the core of life. Everything is connected. And this story shows that. That life is a series of connected events.

I loved this! It's well written and captures Veronica's essence. And it's interesting even if it's a bit depressing.

this was a breath of fresh air . i liked it a lot. i think the reason i liked it so much was because FINALLY veronica realized it wasnt all logan and she was to blame as well. i couldnt help be feel overjoyed :)

Well written. I enjoyed reading it.

This is really well written, and true of their relationship! It made me sad though, so I'm going to read another chapter of Some Truths Hurt to feel better ;)

Very poignant! I always hoped those two crazy kids would make it in a make believe Veronica Mars future world. Unfortunately I you are right about them and described their doomed relationship perfectly. Nice job!

For your first fic it's very good. It's intresting as so much of your life is defined at 17-18 years of age by one decision.

I really liked it. It's very true and realistic. Great work!