So sad!
But good:)

T_T So sad...
You caught me by surprise there, it took me a while to realize what "home" was. And why Qui Gon and Cerasi would be there.
I'm glad Siri was able to be there for him at the time, and...well, Obi Wan telling her he'll wait... *sob*
Gosh, I'm normally not so mushy.

That was so sad!! I had no idea Obi Wan was going to die until the very end!! WELL DONE!!

-M

PS: Working on Rubato; stuck on ideas..

*taps cranium*

*hears empty echo*

*sighs*

That was so touching, although I didn't expect his death. Such kindness shown by the characters in his last minutes.

Good to see Bant and Garen there too.

did Obi-wan...die? TT_TT

it was still a great story. C:

Oh! So sad. I hate it when Obi dies.
But you did it so well.

Very touching. I really like it. Very good portrayal of emotions. Well done.