How do you find these quotes? They fit into the story so well, but man do some of them seem obscure! More power to you my friend.

I am super intrigued by the new twists you are adding to the Leanne/Jake storyline. Leanne is being super shady and Jake seems to be slightly unhinged about the whole situation. Father like son hmm? I am a little nervous that Keith felt it necessary to re-test their DNA. And I am waiting on pins and needles to see how the Leanne storyline plays out. As Logan says, I have a feeling things are going to get really bad.

As for the prom, it was kinda quirky fun. I know it's important to have these more ordinary scenes included in the story, but I found myself impatiently reading through the prom scenes. Now that we are getting to the end of the story, I am just so eager to get to the really good stuff… so many mysteries to be solved!

I'm finally caught up! Stupid real life. OH HOW I MISSED THIS STORY! I have a random urge to reread this story from the start. You have no idea how many times I did that before.. just to get through my "fix" until you updated. It might be harder to finish it all in a week now that it has 40+ chapters, but hey! I can try :) It's worth it.

I can only imagine how draining writing this story was. That was some heartbreaking stuff. VERONICA! LOGAN! Please talk to each other! COMMUNICATE! :( I do love it when they break up though, because it's so heartbreaking and all that, but when they get back together... it's so dramatic and sweet. I'm looking forward to that, and I know you won't disappoint.

Do you plan on doing another story besides this and the second season version of this? I ask because I really liked how you started this story. How you got Veronica and Logan together. I kind of miss that. The new love, does she like me, does he like me, oh wait i thought i hated her/him, i used to like him/her when were 12 thing.

I'm so glad to hear you're already working on season 2. What angle did you decide on doing with the Meg thing? I'm intrigued!

And the Donut officially goes off the deep end. He's lucky Backup didn't go for his throat. Meg summed him up nicely, "sick, creepy stalker." I have a feeling I am going to like him even less with your sneak peak into the closet scene.

I am really liking the family vibe you gave to the Sunday night dinner. Everyone coming together even if it is over protecting V. And I just love Alicia in this. Like you said, a protective Mamma Bear to a T. And again, you are right-on with V's characterization ala the show. What exactly does Duncan have to do before V thinks she needs to take more precautions then "I'll be ready for him." I mean come on, that girl has to weigh 110 pounds soaking wet!

Also, I liked your new twist with Lilly. Definitely throws a new angle into the mix. Mostly, I like how it ties up some loose ends left by the show. When Weevs told V in season 3 about Lilly’s bruises, I assumed RT wanted us to believe they came from Aaron, but that never really fit. Your explanation fits a lot better and really, is not too surprising given Lilly's… umm exuberance with bedroom sports!

And V is on crack if she thinks Keith is just going to take her word for it that Logan didn't kill Lilly. I am with Keith on this one. And speaking of Keith, absolutely loved this comment, “He had to let her go. While some of his reservations were to do with whom she was letting go to be with, most of it was just the cautious nature of a father who had spent a career seeing the worst of human behavior.” It really explains a lot of his behavior and motivations from the past several chapters.

PS. Totally do not get the reference to Voltaire's Angry Glove.

Ahh, the shady 09er boys are up to their old tricks. Come on boys, V and Mac were so going to find out and now you are going to have to pay. I eagerly await the payback! And speaking of 09er boys, I really appreciated the look into Andrew and Rams. It’s nice to see more depth to these characters and their motivations. One last shout out to the boys, LOVE Dick and particularly chuckled over this line, "Party planning is a real career? You really are a genius Ronnie!"

As for V and Logan, it's nice to see them working together through the bad stuff again. I can tell form the ominous ANs that things are going to get worse before they get better, but every time you throw a twist into their relationship and they are able to communicate and work through it, it builds another dimension to their relationship and gives me faith that eventually they can work through anything. I guess that faith will be put to the test soon!

And lastly, the party. First, yoozers, the lovin was hot, hot, hot in this chapter. Talk about needing a cool down! And I really love how you are making Duncan so creepy and unstable. You can just see him unraveling bit by bit. And I am eating it up. I never liked him on the show, and this story really gives me a lot more reason to feed my dislike! I do feel for Meg and hope that she listens to V and Logan's warning. Stay far away! Lastly, how fraking cute were Mac and Enbom in this chapter? I know it's always hard to draw attention away from LoVe, but I am just loving these two!

PS. Aaron totally has a porn stash of his son! SO creepy!

Hey this is the first time I have reviewed this story because I have spent the last few days reading it basically non-stop =] I have to say that I really like it. Though the characters are sometimes quite different to how they would act on the show, I think that you portray them well and manage to keep them close enough to canon to be realistic. I like how you have kept some of the original scenes and storylines but also build your own twists and turns there too. Also I love how you show Logan and Veronica, they are just too cute! On that note, please don't keep them apart for too long, I can beg if that will help! Anyway, thanks for the great story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter and I really hop that you do carry on to do a sequel because I will definitely read it. I was also wondering if you could tell me where to find SKK's extended scripts that you mentioned because I could use something to read whilst I am waiting for the next chapter =]

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Wow, this was a really emotional chapter. It must have been really tough to write but you handeled it very well.

I like how we're still really not sure who killed Lilly, which will be another big mystery. But poor Veronica for having another big mystery on her plate that she can't tell anyone about.

And poor Logan. I hope those crazy kids can work it out soon.

Great chapter! =)

Me too! Comic relief good :) I'm glad Veronica was able to figure out who the Hammer was; I was concerned it would take her longer with her injuries...maybe it should have so she isn't so worried and stressed. I'm glad Mac is trying to help her. I hate hate hate that Logan and Veronica can't seem to communicate with each other. They're totally misreading and misunderstanding each other. If they could just talk...and now Leanne...that is not going to make anything better. What is she thinking. I'm glad Veronica is so mad at her-hopefully that situation does not last long. I don't know how long I'd be able to tolerate it. I'm so grateful for Wallace being there. Don't know what kind of state V would be in without him. Her staring off into space a lot is worrisome... I don't think this distance thing with Logan will make anything better only worse, but maybe with all the stress Veronica will have some sort of break down and Logan will be there or something...anything to get those two taking again...I miss their connection and right now they really need each other. Please fix LoVe :)

LoVed getting an update for this story, and I LoVed this chapter...but it was so sad to read.

i just feel so bad for everyone right now...there are just a million on broken pieces...and no one is in the right place to put them back together yet.

logan and veronica just broke my heart...they are both just struggling with so much, and it seems like if they would just talk things would be ok...but i don't think that they are ready for that convo yet...and as much as i hate seeing them apart, i totally understand why you had to do that. normally i hate it when authors seperate LoVe...but i totally back you up on this. you write their pain to be so believable, this step just seemed natural and needed.

lianne just pissed me off in this chapter...i hate how she disappears and then all of a sudden she wants to come in and play "mom" again...i don't want to trust her...i really liked the idea of alicia becoming a mother type figure to her...so i hope that does not change too much.

i am so interested to see what you do with lily's killer. seeing aaron actually still be the killer would be nice, only if he is convicted...because i really want him out of logans life for good...but i do hate that logan thinks he is like aaron...and i don't want him thinking he is like a killer...
the judge is such a good twist, too. i would be so interested to see what you would do with that!! ah, i can't wait!

thanks so much for the update! it truly does make my day when i get an alert for this story. it is just so fabulously crafted!...i do hope that we move away from all this dark gloom soon...it has to be hard for you to write, i am guessing? anyway, that again so much for the update...can't wait for more :)

That chapter was good, but kinda depressing, so I'm glad Dick will be in the next chapter. Also, I'm not sure if I asked this before, but if Beaver isn't going to be a mass murderer, does that mean that he didn't rape Veronica?

Well, Korea is alright. Alot different then Japan. Got to eat some chicken hearts, which was cool. And tastey. ; )

Can't wait to see how things turn out with the killer. A nice little change up there. Hmm...a surprize parkner? Very nice. Love to see V interacting with someone new.

No VD? Wonderful! I bet alot of other people have thought the same over the years. : ) Dunno what to say about Alicia and Jackie. Yeah, the bit with Wallace's dad and him leaving for months...didn't really make any sence. And Jackie? Sort of like that teacher in the first season, why was she there?

V's angst over the bus crash was wonderful. The 'I am God' ep was one of the best of the season if you ask me. So are you breaking V and L up? If so, gonna be sad. But maybe highlite, like I was saying earlier it would be a nice change up to give Logan the surprize girlfriend this time around.

I think I've made my thoughts on who else is good for him. 'Cough' Meg 'Cough'. Write more soon!


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great chapter! update soon!

Loved it as always but man poor Logan! I feel for Veeonica but I think he taking this misunderstanding harder. I really don't like Leanne and hope that something happens to prevent Veronca from having to live with her. I hope you watching season 2 does not give you any ideas for Duncan and Veronica. Really lookng forward to the next update!

You have managed to catch LoVe very well.
That is, they have major communication issues which lead to their break-ups
If only they would talk to each other!
Then again, without their flaws, they would not be the same characters that we know and love.

Also, I hate Leanne so much!
What a horrible, selfish woman. She is clearly not fit to be a mother, and Balboa County's judicial system needs to be shaken up

anyway, loved it, and can't wait for the next chapter

I agree with your a/n. Comedy relief is needed. Brutal last 2 chapters. Very well written as usual. Tons of details. I miss my LoVe though. Please bring them back soon.