 Dragontine 2009-03-11 . chapter 1It was realy nice! Vary deep. And yes I agree that almost all pyramid heads are all crazy rapists with giant galaves of dom! |
 purefoysgirl 2009-02-07 . chapter 1What a powerful and fantastic short piece! As a long-time fan of the Silent Hill series and of Pyramid Head himself, I think you did an excellent job of getting into the monster's flesh and portraying him in a way very true to his game character as an aspect of guilt. Very strong visualizations, all in all a wonderful bit of work! Excellent job! |
 Axsyn 2009-02-07 . chapter 1It is amazing, simply amazing. |
 Awkwardtheory 2009-01-21 . chapter 1That was really melancholy and beautiful
Great writer you are (yoda much?) |
 XPhatomanna9909 2009-01-10 . chapter 1wow, that was pretty sad to read...poor Pyramid Head T__T!
good, but sad... |
 taintedtruffle 2008-12-18 . chapter 1i like it, so pretty and poetic! |
 JanValentinesslave 2008-12-03 . chapter 1Very well written. I'm a Pyramid Head fan and I think the way you depict him is amazing.
Keep up the good work. |
 AimzNemesis 2008-11-22 . chapter 1This is fantastic. I love your style, and I think you've managed to portray Pyramid Head very well here. The cameos from Henry and Eileen were also a nice touch. Well done! |
 Cyaeris 2008-11-20 . chapter 1/amazing./ |
 Chezara 2008-11-13 . chapter 1Very nice! It has a poetic aspect to it. |
 xprisonicfairytalex 2008-11-08 . chapter 1Gorgeous.
Absolutely gorgeous. |
 LuceTheRavenFox 2008-10-27 . chapter 1Wow.
That was... amazing.
I like how you portrayed the whole 'scatterbrained' aspect of it all without making the writing bad.
...okay, I'll admit it. The real reason it's awesome beyond awesome is because Pyramid Head x Maria is downright sexy, no matter if it's consensual or not.
But good writing definately puts the icing on the cake. xD |
 Ky-chan 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Wow, it was... extraordinary. Rather macabre erotica than anything. But, that's all Pyramid Head is, isn't he? :3
It was deranged scenery, glossy with a strange sense of curious continuance that made it stick for me. Which those are the types of stories I like.
And then the death of Maria.. -sigh- Perfect.
Pure greatness. -adds to favorites- |
 Cat Alex 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Crepy... but awesome! Liked the repetition, almost like a poem. I liked the way it was both PH's POV and 3rd P. Nice PH insights - I love it when writers explore characters. And... I can't think of anything else to say, because I'm lame. But just wanted you to know that this was great and I really enjoyed reading it!
Take care!
CA |