It was realy nice! Vary deep. And yes I agree that almost all pyramid heads are all crazy rapists with giant galaves of dom!

What a powerful and fantastic short piece! As a long-time fan of the Silent Hill series and of Pyramid Head himself, I think you did an excellent job of getting into the monster's flesh and portraying him in a way very true to his game character as an aspect of guilt. Very strong visualizations, all in all a wonderful bit of work! Excellent job!

It is amazing, simply amazing.

That was really melancholy and beautiful
Great writer you are (yoda much?)

wow, that was pretty sad to read...poor Pyramid Head T__T!
good, but sad...

i like it, so pretty and poetic!

Very well written. I'm a Pyramid Head fan and I think the way you depict him is amazing.

Keep up the good work.

This is fantastic. I love your style, and I think you've managed to portray Pyramid Head very well here. The cameos from Henry and Eileen were also a nice touch. Well done!

/amazing./

Very nice! It has a poetic aspect to it.

Gorgeous.
Absolutely gorgeous.

Wow.
That was... amazing.
I like how you portrayed the whole 'scatterbrained' aspect of it all without making the writing bad.

...okay, I'll admit it. The real reason it's awesome beyond awesome is because Pyramid Head x Maria is downright sexy, no matter if it's consensual or not.

But good writing definately puts the icing on the cake. xD

Wow, it was... extraordinary. Rather macabre erotica than anything. But, that's all Pyramid Head is, isn't he? :3

It was deranged scenery, glossy with a strange sense of curious continuance that made it stick for me. Which those are the types of stories I like.

And then the death of Maria.. -sigh- Perfect.

Pure greatness. -adds to favorites-

Crepy... but awesome! Liked the repetition, almost like a poem. I liked the way it was both PH's POV and 3rd P. Nice PH insights - I love it when writers explore characters. And... I can't think of anything else to say, because I'm lame. But just wanted you to know that this was great and I really enjoyed reading it!

Take care!

CA