Oh, very nice. Cute. I liked it alot. It would be cool if you added more chapter, like, Tayuya joins Akatsuki to get revenge on Shikamaru too. XD Or something.

I laughed when Tayuya said, "Do you do magic tricks too?". This whole story is hilarious.

i really like this story! it's really funny! Geesh!

This is awesome, please update!

This was funny. Hidan and Tayuyapairing just waiting to happen.

"Student whips Teacher’s ass no jutsu" was by far my favorite line.

I'm excited to see where this goes, when it goes, if it goes. Nice job!

This looks really good. Tayuya and Hidan do seem like a good couple when you think about since they are the two top cursers in Naruto. If this is continuing please let it.

love it!update soon )

Hm, never would have thought of it on my own, but Hidan, and Tayuya make a great pair. (Let's just hope Jirobo won't see them *together*, I'm pretty sure he'd have a stroke...)

Lots of swearing, but I wouldn't expect anything less of them. I liked their witty banter. This was probably my favourite exchange:

"The fuck are you staring at? You've never seen a decapitated head before?"

"Not one that talked." She seemed unfazed by his language and his situation, "Do you do magic tricks too?"

I don't see a complete; is it safe to presume that it will be continued?

This is definitely different. These two are just meant for each other though, aren't they? I can't wait to read what's next.

interesting and unique update soon

I love how you kept them in character so well! It's been a while since I've read anything Naruto, but just reading this I can remember that you've got them down :D. It's me BTW, I finally got to review your story, now when I see you at Writer's Club again I can remind you that I reviewed!

This is wonderful, plus it funny. HidaTayu FTW!

x3 i am loving this so far. hidan and tayuya are way too alike not to love together, and her finding him is so perfect. i think you wrote that scene really amazingly...

anyway, i hope you can have another chapter up very soon! :3

lazzy

Thumbs up! I like it. Good job!

This pairing is for those who love swearing. Although I am a little confused as to how Tayuya is still alive to meet Hidan, I really like this. The pairing is good, the story works and the description is lovely.