Very good so far. I hope you are going to write more! <3

Love the descriptions with Marian again, you did them so well. Robin, poor poor Robin. Not knowing why Guy is after him. Not wanting to trust Allan. Don't blame him there, seeing Allan's potion and all.

Kegel did good. Even if Em is the only one reviewing. Still is a wonderful chapter. And can't wait till the next.

Kegel comes up with such evil ideas...

Allan' so funny. Hoping for things that are not rightfully his. Pretty soon, he'll be snuggling up to Guy in bed to get what he wants. And Robin; silly silly Robin. Leading ppl into the village with Gisborne after you. Even you should know better, tsk tsk. Come to me instead, I'll protect you from Gisborne :D

Hahaha! Robin shot Allan!

Allan: Not being funny, but that hurt!

Em: Ah, suck it up man. It could have been worse.

Robin: She's right you know. Considering her record of stories, it could be a lot worse

Allan: True, but what are you going to do now? Gisborne's burning down the village

Robin:...take you hostage?

Allan: :S

Robin: :D

Greg: I'm staying out of this...

Em: Update soon!

You're hiding Gisbourne, aren't you! Let me at him! He's...he's...well, actually, I can't think of any words to describe him at the moment...too early...

I could hug Allan! He tried to warn Robin, but Robin didn't listen...tsk tsk. Still, for Gisboure to sink that low...well, it's no suprise...

I need more! What will Robin do?!

--Keiri

Huh? AHH! Who shot who(m)?

Fine and dandy I am myself...being as Robin's okay!

I can't survive much longer...unless you update, that is...

*Raised newly waxed eyebrows*

:) Kudos!

--Keiri

Lol, when Em first read the email notification for this she was thinking it was a CSI fic...

Don't ask :P Too early in the morning to ask.

Robin: Good, let's get away now while we can!

Greg: won't work, already tried.

Robin:...spoil sport

Good ending, though I wonder to who screamed, and I wonder to where the arrow will land

Update soon, but then again you already knew I would say that :P

~Emmithar

Not enough on Robin...I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM!

Please update soon :)

--Keiri

Aww, Em has a strange feeling that something's gone wrong with Robin. (Well, we 'know' something has gone wrong with him, but Em thinks he's been captured)

That's why Allan has returned, to warn them maybe. That's Em's theory. Of course, the other one is for Allan to be returning to be for forgiveness, and when Robin doesn't show up the man takes over the camp and rules all of Sherwood and then banishes Robin :P

Lol, yeah, it's early, don't ask

Much better with reading, strange that Kegel made so many mistakes at first. But glad that she was able to fix them before posting! Keep writing, I want to know what happens now!

~Emmithar

:) I loved how oblivious the man is to the fact the Robin is...well, Robin.

I can't wait to see how this sotry plays out - so far, so good!

--Keiri

You may keep that!” Robin cried. “We do not want to spread rumors that Robin Hood takes everything from a man, do we?”



I think that was my favorite line there, I was laughing pretty hard :D

Poor old man, thinking he was so wise, and now will show up at home in his undergarments. At least not he got to keep thoes :P

Love it so far, as I have already said, Robin is rather cute when he is playing ignorance, and pretending to not know what is going on. One has to wonder what Kegel has in store for the ill-fated character.

Waiting for an update (of course, you knew that already)

~Emmithar