I enjoy your story and I can't wait for the next one though I will try *smiles* You are doing a great job keep it up.

Ah... it seem interesting.. I really want to know, what is happening here XDD

Wow! I seriously love this. You've included every single great character from the game!! Where would we all be without Waka?! You so need to write more, this is just GREAT!

It was good but you forgot some of the brush gods: veil of mist and thunder and maybe a dew others that I can't remeber :) your story's good though :)

please continue! this story is so well written and the idea is so cool! I really do love it!

Wonderfully written. Keep up the good work! :) :D
-Ratt9

Really good so far! :)
:)
-Ratt9

I definately will leave a comment! I love this story, it's great! I love how you put Waka and Oki in there, and made it possible toO!Can't wait for more chapters!

Will Waka ever get another helmet thing?

wow i love,no adore your story! i wish i could write such beautiful attenion grabbing stories but i can't:P i really hope this turns out to be amaterasu and oki but if it is waka instead i will still be happy because i like them both!! sorry that i am babling on but i want to add one more thing...PLZ UPDATE SOON!! I AM DYING TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Awesome! I want to read more of this more story when the next chapter comes out! Competely awesome writing skills!

Whoops, forgot to put it on story alert! Anyways: good chapter though they are some minor mistakes. I would have preferred it if Susano and Kushi's child were female following after her father's footsteps since it would be way funnier and more ironic, but the chapter was good with their excuse. :) I didn't really like the whole vision thing since it felt out of place, though.

yay! you updated! i was so happy XD
never, ever give up on this story...i will hunt you down !
is there gona be more okixammy ? well i dont mind wakka or anything, but just wondering cuz i like oki x ammy^^
keep it up! you have a steady reader here (as you can see XP)

yay! waka x ammy! i hope you get better if you haven't already.

Wow!! Really nice update :D I think I liked the way you portrayed the characters the most in this chapter; it was very cute and a very easy read. You're sentences always flow very nicely together~ Very well worded!! Good job and keep up the good work!! :)

Gorgeous. This story seems to be going along very well. Quite interesting plot too! You're still doing fantastic at all of the character's personalities and keeping within the original story line. Great work, I eagerly await more!