I liked this one. Not as well as 'Cowboy' but it's still really good.

Ellone needs to stop using her powers so recklessly. If she did that though you wouldn't have a story. It's all for the best. Like I said, I liked it.

the fan fic is so cute

That was a really good story! What's "Fathers and Sons"? Another FanFic? I've got to check it out!

I loved it. Very original. Seifer and Selphie rock :P

More Seifer/Selphie!

i really liked this story. selphie/seifer stories are my favs. keep up the good work and keep on writing.(i think a sequel would be nice

this is a really great story ! one of the best selphie and seifer fics that i have read so far and i love your descriptions of the battle selphie did to save seifer ! gotta look for all your other fics ! see what i miss when i don't log on for two nights !)

TOO COOL! GOTTA LOVE THE WICKED HUMOR!

LOVED IT! IS THERE MORE? PLEASE BE MORE! TEEHEE GREAT JOB!

Such a great story. It's the best Selphie/Seifer I've read. Good job!

yayyy! I love Seifer/Selphie stories, but there are so very few around...and they're a hard couple to get the emotions etc. down right for..I hope you consider making a sequel to this..*cue annoying voice*...pleasee?

ackk..I knew they weren't safe, I just knew it. Poor ol' Seifer having to revisit all his painful memories..I may be repeating myself, but you have done great work with this series so far.

Having Selphie, Irvine, and Seifer all stuck inside his head was a very original idea. I'm glad they made it to safety!Seifer being scared of a clown..*laughs*..alot of fanfics make him the invincible guy, not frightened of anything..the clown thing was a nice touch and funny as hell.

Oh no! Whatever can be wrong with Seifer? The bits you've thrown in about his past are most intriguing..I hope Seifer is alright!

Everyone is so perfectly in character!I am enjoying this fanfic very much so far. :D

It's off to a splenderific beginning!And I'm off to read more!