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Reviews for: Strawberry's Shortcake
racooncity
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
ow must be hurts SO MUCH for ichigo... *thinking of the pain*
Phillip William-Wammy
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
So cute! A zanpakuto to break eggs! Lol! Nice fict you have there. Please write more, senpai!
Beyond Flight
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
Hmm...Cute fic. However, I do think the finger biting thing was a little mushy and OOC, but i'm not much of a romantic, so I suppose it's all simply perspective.
Another thing I want to point out. Check your grammer before you post. You tend to switch between past and present tense. If you can fix that, the story would run a lot more smoothly.
meh
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
Wait. Isn't there any cakes in SS?
Cute thou. Write more.
meh
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
Wait. Isn't there any cakes in SS?
Cute thou. Write more.
chiaki
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
LOL. WTF using a zanpaktou to break an egg?
BTW, it's a cute story.
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