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Very nice. Scylla is definitely one of the very interesting yet little-known characters in mythology and you portrayed the human side of her very well. Too many times an author will focus on her animalistic side, but I think you managed to capture the aspect of Scylla as a girl very well. Congratulations! Keep writing. Your style fits very well with the ancient authors' works. You are quite the poet. :)

A great story. Very well written.