WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF HOW CAN YOU THINK THIS SUCKS?!?!? WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF *bitch slaps* jk jk jk ily

WTF. i thought i reviewed this like forever ago. whatever. im doing it now. :o:o:o GASP that is so freaking amazing lyssy! it does not suck. nobody is laughing. except maybe an idiot that things killing to be with the person they love is funny...COME HOME. btw this is amazing if i didnt already tell you :)

*squee*

OMG this was super sad! But, I loved it!

OH.
My.
Effing.
Gosh.

THAT WAS AMAZING.

I mean, it was just like...wow.

Okay. Onto the more coherent and informative part of the review...

I loved the entire concept of it! Jake and Miley being together, but everyone else being jealous and upset and finally it just gets to be too much and someone attacks Jake and then they attack Miley and then Miley dies and then Jake kills himself and WOW.

""We've waited too long to be accepted together, Miles. Now we can finally rest in peace."

Jake pulls the trigger and this time it goes black for him."

AH! Two of the most powerful lines, just that he loves her so much, and now that they're both going to be dead, they can finally just be together without the pressures or pains of everyone else! It was such a perfect line to put in, such a perfect way to end the story...even if it was a bit depressing.

Bottom line is: it was fantastic. Thank you so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much!! It was an amazing birthday present!!

I loved it, Lyss!!
-Lani

that is really good

jhlfkjhlkfjlkhjflhlkfgh I LOVED IT IT DIDNT SUCK GRERAT JOB LYSSY!