please write a few more chapters!
im jittery with anticipation!
:D

oO this ish a really weird fic- but its kewl :D keep writing!

To be honest i did not enjoy it however your plotline was well written and i believe that you did a woderfull job

Mh... I don't really know what to say about this.
On one hand, this story's very well written, has an interesting plot and makes you really feel with the characters, Holly and Artemis.
On the other hand, I still can't mold Artemis into this picture. Since he met Holly, he (for me) don't fits into the picture of a mad one, or cold, like he was sometimes in your story.
But anyway, this was a good story, something other than normal, but still very good.

Think I'll go, read other stories of you now :)

Pia

Man, if you weren't finished, I'd recommend reading "tenderness" by Robert Cormier for more inspiration.

Ok...creepiness wins, then.

Sudden, horrifying thought: bathroom breaks.

I do not think people actually pee in fanfics...I believe relieving oneself is generally ignored.

This is going to bug me, now. It was so creepy-romantic, and now the creepiness is taking over my brain.

Holly has healing powers so she can just heal the scratches she has...unless she has run out of magic.

Not bad, but Artemis should have been given a few severe beatings.

...I don't like this fic...I LOVE THIS FIC! It's so awesome.

what is going to happen next. Such a good story!

that was somber, horrifying, disturbing and ampliphied everything wrong with Atremis. I LOVED IT! If he had gone of his rocker, it woulda been like that! If theres a sequal, I wanna know about it!

gah. its like crack! I need to sleep, but . . .cant . . stop . . .reading . . .the . . .good . . . .fic!

SEQUEL!

I think it's very interesting. I'm only on chap 9, but I think the behavior isn't very Artemis-ish. Still, I'm curious to see where this is going.