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Etherelemental
2009-09-08 . chapter 10
Looking at this, it just seems strange that there's already 10 chapters now. It feels like there should be fewer for this for some reason. Anyway, that was quite amusing. Though, I'm sure the Joss will basically be the only one there that already knows about Kim and Agni, not that Kim's aware of that. Though, I'm wondering what'll happen next, as I'm sure that at the very least Agni's friends will find out in short order. If Joss hasn't already told them yet. And I'm quite eager to see more. So I hope you update soon!
Midnight6
2009-09-08 . chapter 10
*nods* Meow.
madforkigo
2009-09-07 . chapter 10
I really like this story. :)
I think you broke Joss, and now your going after the Parents. LOL
I can't wait to see the her Parents and little brothers reaction.
I'm personally not a Steve Barkin/Shego paring fan, so I hope there date goes nowhere.
If your looking to par Shego up with someone, I'd vote for Dr. Vivian Porter.
As for Kim and her mission's, I think she should take Agni with here when she goes to fight villains, after there done kicking ass they can go to some place nice to have fun.
Can't wait until the next chapter.
Etherelemental
2009-07-08 . chapter 9
Well, that was quite entertaining. I figured Kim would agree to be Agni's girlfriend, even though she had been planning on rejecting her. And I was also really amused with Wade interrupting them and especially with Ron spying on them. Although, I'm quite interested in seeing what Agni's friend's reactions to that development will be. Especially since none of her friends, especially Joss, could be aware of Agni having a romantic interest in Kim. But I hope to see more soon!
XoXoGigglieGirl1
2009-07-05 . chapter 9
omg i luved this chapter
great endin
kim nd agni r finally together!
yeah
can't wait to see how their relationship works out
update soon
ShadowCub
2009-07-04 . chapter 9
Sickwrongwrongdisturning.
Scenic Eyes
2009-07-04 . chapter 9
I'm not sure if I've reviewed this story yet, but just thought I'd tell you what a great job your doing. Love this chapter and all the others. Agni's great, definately one of my favorite original characters. :)
Keep writing.
Etherelemental
2009-06-24 . chapter 8
And here I was hoping that we'd get Kim's answer in this chapter before it ended, and maybe when it ended. But that was amusing. Though, I'm sure Agni would probably have been mortified if Kim had been the one to wake her up. Though, at least there wasn't any other big delay that occurred, seeing as how Agni's already decided the fates hate her or something, and it'd really be torture for her to have to wait and have a mission come up for Kim, which would postpone Agni getting Kim to give her her answer. But anyway, I'm really quite interested in seeing what comes next. And I hope to see the next chapter soon!
Etherelemental
2009-06-24 . chapter 7
Personally, I'm wondering if Kim's going to change her mind somewhere around when she told Ron that she decided to tell Agni and thought that she'd say no and by the time she tells Agni. Either because she won't have the heart to tell her no, or because something else changes for her. But it certainly was amusing with Ron and Camille having a conversation about it in the middle of the fight. Although, I'm guessing that Camille got the approximate age wrong, since you mentioned that she'd turned into an 18 year old version of Shego until Ron gave her a few pointers, and you never mentioned the age being adjusted again. But anyway, I'm sure it'll be quite good with what happens next. So, on to the next chapter!
Etherelemental
2009-06-24 . chapter 6
I was wondering if Kim would say that or if she'd just say that she'd be interested in seeing how things went. Since it really wouldn't be much of a fic for Agni to get shot down right there. Especially with all of the build up that you did for that one single moment. I'm wondering what else you have already posted. So, on to the next chapter!
Etherelemental
2009-06-24 . chapter 5
Well, that certainly was entertaining. Especially when Xun came to Agni for advice about dating. And the part that makes it most entertaining is Agni's complete lack of dating experience to draw on. As well as her reasoning of why Joss would be better at giving the advice. But I'm also now wondering what Xun's gonna do about her problem. Anyway, I guess I'll just see it as it comes out. So, on to the next chapter!
Etherelemental
2009-06-24 . chapter 4
That was an amusing scene. Although, the jellyfish appearing in the school's pool, certainly would be something that could create a 'jelly fish episode'. And I wonder if Barkin realized the importance of Shego staying focused on her class while they were taking their test, and instead waiting to talk to her during the transition period. But anyway, I'm wondering what Shego's reaction to who Agni likes is. Especially since she said that she'd support Agni, so long as she tried. Anyway, on to the next chapter!
Etherelemental
2009-06-24 . chapter 3
That was an interesting chapter. Although, I'm wondering when you'll get back to Kim's dilemma with Agni having feelings for her. I hope it gets back to that in the next chapter, but I'll just have to see since it's already up. Though, I thought it was quite interesting to see how things are at the school, especially with how Ron's reacting towards Barkin still. Anyway, on to the next chapter!
madforkigo
2009-05-31 . chapter 8
Glad to finally see a update for this story. Can't wait for the real talk between Kim and Agni, looking forward to more.
Please update soon. :)
Brishelle
2009-05-24 . chapter 8
It sounds as though Kim and Shego are still trying to figure out what's going on between them as well as with Agni and Kim. Is Shego uneasy about things because she still has feelings or is it just because it's her ex and daughter? Brill work so far.
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