Honey, i translated this story into chinese today. Please please please allow me to post it here: .

i will send you the adress and readers comments.

Thanks!

waiting for your permission...

No worries, the quality was awesome all right. Really sweet, I loved the role reversal of the brothers. The flashbacks blended in the story very well. You wrote some great description, too.

That was nice, I enjoyed it. Good work.

Good story! I liked the parallels between when they were children and now.

This was cute, and quite touching at the same time.

Somehow, I missed this. I can't believe it.

It was awesome. I loved it! I love the Sick!Dean and the story of the weechesters. Sam is too cute.

And dean thinking Sammy has cancer. I almost had tears!

Anyways, I made this story a featured story at Supernatural Fanfiction Awards... I'm really behind, so, it ended up being October 2008 featured story.

Aw! I love the flashbacks! They were adorable when they were little! :D And I loved how the current situation was so similar, just switched around a little.

Favorite bits? Well, definitely this:

“I thought I'd get you to like vegetables if it came in the shape of a car. You ended up hating cars instead.”

And, of course, the rumbling motor noises trick that both of them used (and didn't work...)!!

Awesomely brilliant story! ^__^

Aw. How cute.

I think I reviewed the wrong story last time LOL, but this one was really good as well. I've spent half of the day printing out your stories and reading them. I liked the flashback mirroring the current life. Good story!

Hey there... have found your fiction via another writer's favorites list and just wanted to say how much I am enjoying it! I love the veggie car. I'm going to try that with my son... ;-)

Love, love, love HurtDean + CaringSam... and your portrayal of Sam's sincerity and tolerance is just spot on.

Delightful! (applauds) You handled the jumps between past and present so well! Loved it. :-)

That was awesome. I freakin' loved it. Very well written. I loved how you had the flashbacks in it and showing the similarities between the two. Very well done.

aww, I loved it, that was precious, very adorable. haha, I loved it very much, it made me all fuzzy inside, lol. Very nice job.

Ash

great story :)
I absolutely love Supernatural, but unfortunately they only just started to air the first season where I live, so I can't be reading to many of the many great stories you no doubt wrote already in fear of spoilers...
But this one wasn't about an episode and I'm glad I could read it :)
Loved how you worked in the similarities between past en present, with the roles reversed. Great writing of the relationship between the brothers. :)

Really liked the story!!