Hey, i really love your story.
Please update soon. =)

nice chapters. this is a lizzie and gordo story right?

Good story! I always like it when writers have "big plans".
I wonder where you're taking this...
MathLeft

Nice fic...
Keep updating...

Great story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!

could u please finish the story..its really interesting

ps. in america we graduate high school at 18 unless you're like really smart and can do four years of work in three years...

There is a lot of honest emotion here. The rambling works well, because that is in fact exactly how Lizzie would be thinking and feeling in this situation, I would imagine.

There were just a couple of things that did not ring true for me: I see you are from the UK, so your use of the word "chemist" might make sense on your side of the pond, but Lizzie in the US would not go to a chemist for a pregnancy test, she would probably go to a drug store. Or maybe even Wal Mart!

Also, and I don't really know, because my cell plan does not include texting, but I kind of thought text messages were generally short, like "Come over plz. Now? Impt. Luv, Liz." and he would reply, "On my way, xx" or maybe even something shorter.

Anyway, I'm waiting to see where you are going with this, and who Adam might be. Oh! And welcome to LMFF!

christy