 mandy-san 2009-02-07 . chapter 1sad, awesome, and deeper down, also kinda sweet, in a way. love how you kept it short; the idea wouldn't fit with a long fic. |
 Kaoru Gal 2008-12-26 . chapter 1Heart breaking D:
Poor Riku. The last line was perfect, really.
-Joh |
 Failing Mentality 2008-12-06 . chapter 1It's so sad. |
 vampirelf 2008-11-21 . chapter 1 just ate my long review. D: and i need to go crash now. XD
great & well written fic~ very emotional (oh the ending killed me) and lovely in that it has angst but at the same time it's lifting in how riku tries so hard, loves so much.
and of course the writing flows as always and just makes riku's pov stronger. |
 Violet Shadows 2008-11-13 . chapter 1Nice, its hard to find kingdom hearts fics that aren't shameless smut. |
 animegirl37 2008-11-10 . chapter 1 Wow! This is fantastic! There are no words, seriously, Just know that I love you ^_^ |
 roterhimmel 2008-11-09 . chapter 1Ew no. I'm so happy I find your fictions, since I was crazy for some well-written fictions that actually MAKE SENSE (not another high school AU with shy!girly!Sora and cool!bad-ass!Riku etc) and play in the KH universe... and then this, a one-sided love still, I'm so so so happy.
I actually really hate to think that Sora doesn't love him like this, too. But I guess, from the game, from canon, you can see at it like this, Riku the best friend and well, Kairi his love... sigh. It's just so sad. This is the most wonderfully painful, realistically done fanfiction I've ever read concerning KH. Thank you for writing and sharing it |
 redstrawberrychan 2008-10-28 . chapter 1Wow...heartbreaking... This evoked a lot of emotion in me... this fic hits the nail on the head... because yeah, this is how it would be for Riku... silently watching, guarding, protecting Sora, pining away, angry because he will never have Sora, not the way he wants him anyway, but loving him enough to be happy for him even if he is resentful...
Just reallty "wow"... though I have to say I'm not surprised I always feel awed when I read your Riku/Sora fics... so wow again...
Wonderful stuff, good job! =D |
 Azamiko 2008-10-27 . chapter 1*pouts* |
 xxBeautifulxxNightmarexx 2008-10-27 . chapter 1gah! that was so beautiful T_T -sniff sob cry-
That was amazing thoo. i lovers it! (I gave you and extra exclamation point. Feel special :3)
x3
Poor Riku.:( I gives him my sad face. |
 Crysania Fay 2008-10-27 . chapter 1Aw! Poor Riku! I hate it that Sora wouldn't love him like that. They belong to each other. |
 Rishtalak 2008-10-27 . chapter 1Gah! SequelSequelSEQUEL! Maybe it was implied, but you never did show us what Sora's reaction was!
Excellent story, but please. Give us more than this. |
 Etrixan 2008-10-27 . chapter 1It was beautifully written and completely sucky. Poor Riku - to be sitting at the table and not allowed to eat. =( |
 ShadowShapeShifter 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Oh wow. This was beautiful and it hurt so much. Great emotion and imagery. |
 ToryJessica 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Ah! It's so sad and so sweet at the same. Poor Riku. RxS for life! :3 |