| Reviews for Danny Potter and the Power Stone |
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Robynmas 6/28/11 . chapter 1 Sooo are you going to Do parodies of the other movies? You know, order of the pheonix? Half blood prince? Deathly hallows part one and two? |
EmmyMetal 1/31/10 . chapter 2um,I have a question about the title and the is it called Danny Potter and the Power stone?But you said his name was Danny Fenton in the it counfuses than that...AWESOME! |
John SJ Toongamer 11/15/08 . chapter 17Roku wins! Bane got zip! That was a good story. Now, I know you won't be working on the sequel until probably next year, but I'd like to ask if you can use Gen again, this time as a first-year student with fire powers who befriends Danny and helps him out. And could you put him in Roku? Anyway, continue with your other stories and keep up the good work. |
DragonMaster77 11/14/08 . chapter 17Hi sorry for not reviewing. Thanks for giving me the cameo I look forward for more if any and I promise to review more on storys that interst me. |
nobodiez 11/13/08 . chapter 1 wow i can't wait for your POTC 3 parody,BTW a mistake was made with one of my suggestion but it was fault and i don't blame you and i have some new idea's for the story when it is reveal that scrooge is daffy father danny:I can't believe it sora:cbelieve what, that daffy father is still alive? danny:not that, i can't believe that scrooge mc duck is a pirate. he one of the most honest hard-working ma er i ment duck to ever live sora:you got a point there,why on earth would a highly sucessful,intelligent and strong of charater type person would would even consider this this life style june:scrooge is suppose to be a good honest, straight decent highly moral guy, even if he is the second chepest charater in the world,(first is mr krabs by the way) scrooge:well it was not my decesion, the author felt of all the charaters, i was best suited to the role. any it a mix blessing, alteast i won't have to put up with launchpad mcquack for a few days |
acosta perez jose ramiro 11/13/08 . chapter 17Very good stuff here! And Scrooge as Jack's dad... interesting idea. Keep the good writing. |
KingHuffman 11/13/08 . chapter 17Aarggh! Shiver me timbers, Mr. Jus! I can't wait for you to do 'Pirates of the Toonian: The End' me lad. I liked how you added my suggestions to the last chapter of Danny Potter. I hope you've got plans on how to use Geronimo and Sweetie in 'The Chamber of Ghosts'. Oh yes, I found out your plans for Fanfiction, I also can't wait for the Indiana Jones parodies, Indy's my hero! Isn't right,Junior? I know you like pairing Ash with Ami, but I'm a little curious. What makes you think that Ash would REALLY like Ami at all? Do you just like the couple? Or do you find it preferable to Ash x Misty, Ash x May, and Ash x Dawn? (Though Dawn is really, really cute!) I'm just curious, nothing more, because I like Ash x Misty together. They're more of a couple than Ash x Ami would ever be, no offense. Oh, and Jus, here may be a suggestion for 'Chamber of Ghosts'. I don't know if you're Irish or anything but... for an added scene when Danny checks up on Ryan in his ghost form he finds the Prince singing drunk with DK and Darkwing Duck. The song is Charlie Mops/Beer Beer Beer. I'll write down the lyrics for you. Ryan: He must have been an Admiral, a Sultan or a King! DW: And to his praises we will always sing! DK: Look what he has done for us, he's filled us up with cheer! All three: Lord Bless Charlie Mops, the man who invented beer beer beer, tiddly beer beer beer! Ryan: A long time ago, way back in history, when all there was to drink was nothin but cups of tea. DW: Along came a man by the name of Charlie Mops, and he invented a wonderful drink and he made it out of hops. DK: Hey! He must have been an Admiral a Sultan or a King, and to his praises we will always sing. Ryan: Look what he has done for us he's filled us up with cheer! All three: Lord bless Charlie Mops, the man who invented beer beer beer tiddly beer beer beer. Ryan: The Drunken Rat, the Aiken Drum, the Trowie's Pub as well one thing you can be sure of, its Charlie's beer they sell! DW:So all ye lads and lasses at eleven O'clock ye stop for five short seconds, remember Charlie Mops! All three: 1.. 2.. 3.. 4.. 5.. All three: Hey! He must have been an Admiral a Sultan or a King, and to his praises we will always sing. Look what he has done for us he's filled us up with cheer! Lord bless Charlie Mops, the man who invented beer beer beer tiddly beer beer beer. Ryan: A barrel of malt, a bushel of hops, you stir it around with a stick, the kind of lubrication to make your engine tick. DK: 40 pints of wallop a day will keep away the quacks. Its only eight pence hapenny and one and six in tax. All three: 1.. 2.. 3.. 4.. 5.. All three: Hey! He must have been an Admiral a Sultan or a King, and to his praises we will always sing. Look what he has done for us he's filled us up with cheer! Lord bless Charlie Mops, the man who invented beer beer beer tiddly beer beer beer tiddly beer beer beer. The Lord bless Charlie Mops! |
dr-fanmai-lover 11/13/08 . chapter 17 bervo palse do other-harry-potter-mioves/danny-potter-mioves also-palse-do-the terinamtor-mioves-form-80,s i really-dispoited naver-any-staers-of-powerstione-stars-form-powerst ione -form-powerstione-aime-tv-saires-naver-showd-up-wh at-a-rip-off |
Sovereign64 11/13/08 . chapter 17Great story overall, JusSonic! Good job finished writing it. And good luck with the third and final Pirates movie! |
Zim'sMostLoyalServant 11/13/08 . chapter 17Good chapter. I liked the suggestions you fit in for the conclusion- especially the part about Ryan getting Pete's job, and Pete complaining that it's not in the script. It'll be interesting to see how you fit that in the sequels. Can't wait for your third POTC parody. Keep up the good work. Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off. |
Anonymous But Interested 11/13/08 . chapter 17 Hey there. Thanks immensely for getting this last chapter up AND for liking the last of my ideas enough to use them. BOTH are greatly appreciated. As for the wrap-up to your Pirates trilogy, I'll DEFINITELY be there. :-D Anyway, I have a few suggestions I just thought of. 1. At the part where we get to Daffy in Bowser's locker, he could be singing on a stage on board the Great Toon with a whole bunch of duplicates of himself heckling him "Just like Julius Caesar was betrayed by Brutus, I should have suspected that a Princess would turn out to be my Judas. I'm so dismayed. Is this how I'M repaid? To be ... betrayed? BETRAYED!". As he's listening to all the duplicates heckling him, Daffy could quip "Figures. I can't even get respect from myself." 2. When Daffy asks "Did nobody come to save me JUST because they missed me?" Porky could say "Well, Captain Daffy Duck, sir, Bugs and I did." before continuing according to the script. 3. At the part where Scrooge reveals the shrunken head of his dead wife/Daffy's mother, somebody of your choice could let out a disgusted-looking face and sound. Scrooge could then snap "Hey, watch it, you insensitive cretin. This head is the only keepsake I have left of poor Goldie. Those dratted witch doctors didn't leave anything else." before he starts breaking into tears (his wife's death being the biggest chink in his emotional armor) and Daffy reflexively starts comforting him (since, in this parody, Scrooge is his father). 4. At the part where Daffy is stuck in that cell in Bowser's ship, he could comment "Good thing for me Bowser forgot I'm a classic style toon." and uses his classic style toon flexibility to squeeze his way through the cell commenting "I told Sora I could do it when he and Fenton busted me out in the parody of the first movie.". 5. During the final showdown with Bowser, it could be only Sora that gets killed, with the characters of your choice arguing "How come Danny got spared?" and the character of your choice arguing back "One: There was only enough room in that chest for ONE heart. Two: Danny is only an extra in the Will Turner role. Sora is the main one. Three: Do you REALLY think this author could bring himself to keep Danny and June apart for ten years, even if it was in the script? Cut down his usage of the pairing to one story every four or five, yes, but not keep them apart for ten years." and 6. During the part where it is revealed that Daffy, anticipating Eggman pulling a fast one on him again, deliberately pocketed part of that one map in the epilogue, Daffy could be snickering "Aren't I a stinker?", to which Bugs, who is swimming up to Daffy's makeshift ship, retorts "Actually, doc, that's MY line, but I'm willing to let it slide if you make me an equal partner in this hunt." before Daffy relents "Oh, well. I suppose I COULD use the company and, as much as I hate to admit it, you ARE a lot more trustworthy than Eggman." before Bugs and Daffy break into a rendition of "We're Off On The Road To (insert location here)", based on Family Guy's "We're Off On The Road To Rhode Island" (which can be found on YouTube) with Daffy singing Brian's parts and Bugs singing Stewie's. That is, of course, assuming you like the ideas enough to use them. If not, I profusely apologize in advance and still look forward to the story as soon as time and inspiration will allow. |
Essteka 11/13/08 . chapter 17Hey there! Sorry for not reviewing much of the Danny Potter chapters. I have been really busy recently. However, I was able to read every chapter today. All I can say is great job with each chapter and thanks for using my suggestions. Anyway, the third and final chapter of the Pirates trilogy? Alright! And what's better is the fact you are using my suggestion of Scrooge as Captain Teague! That's great. Of course, I already have a suggestion for you, pal! -When Scrooge and Daffy are talking to each other about eternal life, Scrooge could say "Listen, Daffy. I always thought life is like a hurricane. But ETERNAL life is worst than a hurricane." |
Neros Urameshi 11/13/08 . chapter 17What a great ending! Hooray for Roku! I love it! In your face, Paul and Bane! XD Cream: I'm glad we all won the House Cup! Shadow: I'm very sure that Paul will want revenge, no doubt. Me: Anyway, whenever you have the time to do the second Harry Potter movie parody, I have about an extra or two to go with Danny's group, to be with Shadow and Cream; Bubbles and Jace (her OC boyfriend). If not, I truly understand. Congratulations on a great parody! |
Phillip Clark 11/13/08 . chapter 17Too bad for Daffy. This means that the one...person he possibly hates more than Bugs is his own cousin (snickers). |
TLSoulDude 11/13/08 . chapter 17One thing you can count on for that Pirates of the Toonian final story...that I won't be there. Sorry, but I'm a SoraxKairi man, through and through. And don't put it down, okay? It's one of my favorite pairings. |