This was such a delight. A very sweet and humorous take on the incident that led to Nevilles first signs of magic. You have a way with words and characterization.)

Very cute story. Algie is well written and Neville is a darling. A few spots where it could use improvement Enid is described as vapid when she was a Ravenclaw, etc. but it's still very fun.

Heh. Uncle Algie seems like the kind of relative that you love to hate. And poor little Neville, growing up with all these old people! Great fic.

*laughs* How cute! Great story!

Delightful. It was just right. It's funny that you have all of them in different houses. Algie in Hufflepuff, Enid in Ravenclaw, and of course Neville was sorted into Gryffindor. Was his grandmother Slytherin, I wonder? I could see that. That would be funny. Oh the rivalry! Keep writing.

How hilarious and adorable! This is such a funny, well-written fic, and I especially loved your characterizations of the Longbottoms. Uncle Algie is priceless. I love the references to the other members of the family, and how effortlessly the story flowed. Excellent fic. :D

Hehe! I laughed my butt off reading this! I liked the way you incorporated Neville's aunt and uncle. And the Beginner's Bludger. That's why people like you write and people like me don't; such inginuity! You should really think about writing things about other minor characters as well.

Wonderful!

Your Uncle Algie is perfect, exactly as I imagined him. Or rather you took the outlines of the man I imagined from the books' few lines, and drew a character I never could have thought of, but seems essentially right. So English too.
NM, chuckling and off to recommend this story

All I have to say is this: LOL! That was hysterical, and that is exactly how I imagine Neville's family. (Poor kid-but you gotta love Uncle Algie.) Keep it up!

*laughing softly* no wonder Neville is scared of brooms/

Funny...

I absolutely adore this. Beginners bludger is a brill idea. see you round, luv Poppy (You reveiwed my Monthy Python Fic, remember?)

That was a great Neville story! I always wondered about his family trying to scare magic out of him. Way to answer it, good job!

Very descriptive and well planned out story. 4 stars out of five. Try to add a little more action! But anyways good job!