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Reviews for: CRIME AID: The Auction
Jac Danvers
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
Ah! I loved this! This was perfect, and would have been a great part of the episode. I really liked how you had the relationship between David Wallace and Ryan as well-- it added just the right tension and fun to the story. Great job!
Twisted Ingenue
2008-11-02 . chapter 1
SQUEE! I LOVE RYAN AND KELLY! THIS WAS SO SWEET! EP!
Blondala
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
Is it? Is it really...? It is! Ryan/Kelly fluff! My all-time favorite. I don't write it because frankly, I'm not a good enough writer to handle THAT couple, but you got it right. It's funny and fluffy and totally not cheesy. Like, OMG!
dorydafish
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
and i thought that i was the only one that thought kelly might auction herself...sadly she didn't though...that made me sad...

...i love the scene you wrote though, it was perfect for them. Kelly and Ryan belong. they have to get bak together, this season is theirs!! the no kelly and ryan the last 3 weeks is making me think something big is brewing in the distance. hopefully
poeticgrace
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
Love it! This would have been a great scene. I love how you referenced the NetFlix line. You are making me want to start another story...
bingbangboom714
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
I loved this! It was adorable!! :)
JAMonMyToast
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
Aw! This was awesome, because you not only got Kelly and Ryan perfectly in-character, but you got everyone else well too. One line I liked from Michael was:
“The 40 Year Old Virgin? Yikes, what a loser. And they actually made a movie about this guy? Watch out, Dwight, you’re next.”

Great job. Oh, and the part about Kevin betting was great too.
WonderfallsOnDaisies
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
I liked it.
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