This was amazing. I love how you pulled each of the siblings greatest fear and played on it. It was well written. I couldn't tear myself away from it.

i liked the story alot an i loved that episode of buffy my mom has it on dvd lol

good story, very good for Halloween, but when are you going to update the other stories?! You did promise, you know.

Poor Sand Sibs, they have so much emotional baggage. Very nice story.
~SuperMoose

I love it. Their greatest fears really fit with the characters, and I like how you used their deceased relatives to bring them out. Kankuro reaching out to Gaara was very sweet. It was also nice to see him seek his younger brother out at the end and how Gaara seemed concerned when he told him about his illusion. They're really coming together and bonding as brothers.

Aww! Love this! I always enjoy your fics! This was awesome! Great job as always!

Great job as always! I hope things go all right with the contest on dA and this was a great Halloween scare! The part of the decaying Kazekage really got to me and I cringed as you described how the maggots squeezed out of his mouth. BLEH!

Great bonding and I like how you played all their fears and the idea that someone would try to do that, even though it's bad. The ending with Temari fighting Shikamaru like that is super hilarious and I like how she revealed the first cicle, "I'm just warming up!"

I'm a fan of your stories, I even 'alert' your stories. But I never review, because my English is not good :P

But this one, I have to write a review :)

I didn't watch Buffy so I didn't know the episode this story base on, but I love Harry Potter, and I feel the Sand siblings were facing Boggarts :P Your descriptions are so good, you can view Gaara from the inside so much. And Kankurou, you can describe him so well.

And I love all your stories so much!

Btw, in this story, you said that:
The doorkeeper was an elderly man with steel grey hair and overly wide eyes, as though he were permanently frightened senseless. “That’ll be 300 yen per person...

I think in Naruto-verse, they used Ryo, not yen? CMIIW

One word: Amazing. I loved it. You're good at scary stories. Write another one sometime!

Wow, that seriously gave me the creeps!

But that was a great story! I always wanted Temari to fight a zombie!Karura and Gaara a zombie!Kazekage... it was nearly the case!^^

Wonderful job as usual!

Great story. That was one of my favorite Buffy episodes. Very original idea.

Oh wow...AWSOME! That was so cool! I--I--I don't know what to say. It seems that saying 'this was good' or 'I loved it' just don't have the same kind of impact anymore when it comes to reviewing YOUR stories.

But anyway I'm glad that you posted this and I'm glad I read it, especially since it's almost Halloween and all. Seriously I just can't get over the Sand Sibling love I see in every one of your stories. And the fact that they had to face their fears that were intended to break them apart only made them grow stronger together was the best kind of bonding.

Honestly I feel so sorry for Gaara and Kankuro having to go through all that, but I think it was the wake up call they needed in order to understand each other better, and it sure came in handy when Kankuro was trying to wake Gaara up. And Temari sure proved to be the stronger of the three (which is probably due to her temper ^_^), being the only one to break free of the jutsu.

And seriously she sould really thank Shikamaru for making them go inside the hotel other wise they never would have found the traitors; but I think that her beating the living deay lights out of him is just her way of saying thank you.

Golly this is the longest review I ever posted, but I guess that shows how much I really loved this fic. Anyway keep up the good work (boy thats a cheesy line XP) and I'll see you in your next fic.

Love,
CandyGirl ^_^