i love this =D

Wow, this is really nice. There's this warmth to it that really strikes the perfect note. Just really nice on the whole.

AW! That was great, in-character, and completely believable. Kudos to you! ^_^ Absolutely loved it.

Back in the day, I was a fan of your Roy-centered Full Metal Alchemist fiction. So, when I saw you'd written about National Treasure, a movie I really enjoy, I thought I'd give this a try.

It has a really quiet, soft feel to it, and the summer imagery is very well done. Makes me feel like I'm sitting outside in August instead of in my office on Halloween.

Also, I think I love your characterization of Riley. It's like you really appreciate his quirkiness - even if Ben can't, not completely anyway.

AW! -drowns in the cuteness of it all-

I loved that, that was adorable! ^^ Very good, I really liked it! =)

-AP