|Reviews for Behind Closed Doors|
| teh-ena 3/29/13 . chapter 22
I really loved reading this story. It is so beautifully written. You capture the scenes, the emotions, and the characters with surprising clarity and brilliant descriptions. The story is tragic and sad, but it was happy and humorous at the same time. The ending felt rather abrupt and unfinished, and I would love to read a sequel to this about the reunion of the Doctor and Rose. Still, the telling of a tragic tale ended with hope and the ability for the characters to decide their own fate, and that is rather poetic in itself.
| Bunny-chan19 3/9/13 . chapter 22
This was so beautiful and tragic! You kept everyone in-character and yet took it to another level. Every chapter was so well-crafted, and even when you were breaking my heart at the end of the story I loved you for it. I seriously hope you decide to write a sequel though, because it sort of feels like you left it open for Rose to make that decision by way of the last gift from the human doctor. And yes, like everyone else, of course I cried. Several times.
| TammyGreen 3/3/13 . chapter 22
I cryed. Twice.
Thank you for this so very much.
And can you maybe, you know, continue it? Because this is fantastic.
| TimorousBeastie333 1/25/13 . chapter 13
I had to reread this and this is absolutely my favorite chapter. Hearing how he feels about her, truly. How we all know he felt about her, it's magnificent. Naming her the most powerful creature in existence is perfect. This is stil my favorite Post Journeys End story. It's amazing. And this chapter still makes me cry.
| Mandy Jones 1/10/13 . chapter 22
This has been one of the greatest fan fictions I have ever read...no joke.
This was just simply amazing and brilliant.
22 chapters just doesn't feel enough!
Longing for cause I just can't get enough! 3
| Nostalgic Beauty 12/11/12 . chapter 22
So it's all up to Rose now. Is that the end of this fic? You haven't classified it as completed, but this last chapter is titled "epilogue" so I am wondering. Really, if this is how you're ending it then shame on you! You left too much uncertainty. The whole point of sudden endings is that the author leaves enough information for the reader to guess the rest of the story. I for one at least want to know Rose's decision before you put this fic to rest.
You are an amazing writer. Keep writing!
| Um. Fish 12/5/12 . chapter 22
Dear god this better have a sequel or I will die from frustration!
| Um. Fish 12/5/12 . chapter 16
Aaaannddd my heart is officially broken.
| Um. Fish 12/5/12 . chapter 14
Oh my god my heart is breaking.
| Um. Fish 12/5/12 . chapter 13
Absolutely beautiful! Besides how in character they are, and how perfectly you nailed their relationship, I completely adored your imagining of the Gallifreyan language. I've yet to see anyone else approach it that way. Time Lords - of course they have a language that's chronically focused/influenced. Totally brilliant!
| Claire 11/6/12 . chapter 21
Oh God...I don't know if you've read my previous comments...I am legitimately sobbing, now. Anyway, the writting is still as good as ever, you're really a great 'fanfictioner' (does that word even exist?)
| Claire 11/5/12 . chapter 16
NO BUT THIS ISN'T OKAY OMG they were making out and all, all lovely-fluffy and now waht's this? WHAT KIND OF SICK PLOT TWIST IS THAT? OMG YOU'RE KILLING ME I SWEAR. HELP.
(No, but more seriously, your fanfic is great, and very well written. I love it. Even if it's tearing my heart apart THANK YOU VERY MUCH)
| Claire 11/2/12 . chapter 12
This is one of the greatest sex scenes I've seen so far. You've perfectly grasp the fact that the Doctor has never done it as a human, never done it with Rose. I love you so much for writing that. I wish I knew how to express what I really meant but I'm kinda speechless, so please just know you've done a damn good job here.
| That One Girl 10/6/12 . chapter 22
You and you only and you alone,
Wonderful and amazing, terrible and inspiring.
I love you. And I love this. I love what you've done. Love that you've done it. Exuberantly and endlessly overjoyed and happy that you did!
This is the best thing I have ever read; will ever read.
Seriously THE Best.
I don't even know where to begin. You captured everything, every emotion and every thought, perfectly. You kept it all within the confines of a truly "Doctor Who" written script. The characters were not molded into something new or different as to what a fan simply wanted them to be.
No, you kept them as they were. Kept them as WHO they were. And you made them Brilliant. Brilliantly angry and unsure and hurt. Understandably sad and sweet and adorable.
You kept them the same, but still you were able to give us what we wanted; give them what they needed.
I can't tell you how many times your chapters made me laugh and giggle and smile moronically. Made me want to yell in understanding and in happiness that there was finally someone that understood. Made me want to cry in absolute agony. For Rose. For the Doctor. For him and for Him.
The language you used, so perfectly picture painting. The vocabulary; fresh but not over stretched. The scenes and speech and conversations between each other. The described memories and sensations felt; or imagined to be felt if one could imagine the way a Time Lord would feel things.
So Wonderful. Absolutely Wonderful.
You and You alone are the most amazing person/writer/fan on Earth and your Talent is well worthy of the greats. One day you will create equally amazing if not more moving stories of Hurt and Love and Death and The Imbossible that will forever imprint on the souls of millions that will watch or that will read what you create/have created/will create.
And I will remember how absolutely Wonderful you always were and always were meant to be.
And somewhere in the world David Tennant, Russel T Davies, and a lonely angel flying and falling and ripping through space will cry at your words. Be moved and humbled by your written words. Be touched and sincerely appreciate your simple existence as silent tears stain their face and quivers tremble their voices as they shake within their throats.
You and you only and you alone have done this. You have done this with seemingly smooth and ease of that only an expert could do.
You and you alone.
| Falling Through Time 10/8/12 . chapter 22
You only and you alone.
This thing as a whole was simply amazing. There wasn't one chapter that sunk below the bar of excellent. Each individual chapter had something perfect to it.
Your writing was Fantastic. The characters were perfect. You kept them perfectly as they were, as WHO they were. You didn't change them just to better fit an ending you wanted. No, you made it work with what was already done. You made me laugh and giggle and gush with joy openly and moronically as well as brought tears to streak down and stain my face.
Your vocabulary was beautifully fresh without being over complicated. Your story telling was clean and smooth. Your descriptions painted perfect, vivid images. Your Intimacy was deep without being vulgar. You made me want to scream out in parts to agree with Rose, to agree with her anger and hurt. You made me want to scream at her to stop rejecting the human Doctor because it hurt him so much because he loved her, he was so in love with her. You described and explained amazingly well how a Time Lord felt, if one can imagine at all how a Time Lord would feel about things.
You, you only and you alone are the most wonderful person to ever exist and somewhere in the world David Tennant, Christopher Eccleston, Russell T Davies, and a Lonely Angel that's flying, falling, ripping through space and time are truly touched by you. Truly moved to tears by you. Because you and you alone are wonderful and terrible, amazing and inspiring. And I love you, and I hate you.
And for that I thank you.