OH NO DON'T TELL ME YOU DROPPED THIS STORY. I'M TOO INVESTED. WHO DUN IT? OH NO...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH .Funny stories..I read a play alike but not all like this .

nice promise _

nice story for a Guess Who fanfiction. In fact this is the only one so far that actually has a story line within the characters of the game and not just people playing it. Keep it up. And keep ur already-broken promise! :p

I liked the story, keep going!

Really nice. I like how you took this classic board game and made it into a full fledged story. Were these the names of any actual characters from the game?

Wow a guess WHo fanfiction.. one of the two that there are lol.

I like the idea of this story anyway so keep up the good work

Were you on crack when you wrote this? Not that the story isn't bad, the idea itself - who the hell writes about Guess Who?

Seriously? A Guess Who fandom? Isn't that a board game? Anyway, there weren't very many obvious errors. The characters, as someone before me said, were a little bland, but it's Guess Who, what do you expect?

great story!

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...seriously? A Guess Who section? I can think of a few more...uh...deserving games to have a section.

Anyway, decent. I didn't notice any glaring errors, maybe a spelling error or two. The characters seem awfully bland though. Not your fault, there is only so much you can do with Guess Who...

It's... a Guess Who fanfiction. *boggles* Well, you certainly picked a unique fandom.