That's a great piece of work you got there! It's so moving, with so few words 3

Lily Evans P. is Harry's mother, Lily Luna P. is Harry's daughter. The pairing is off which actually scared me at first (Snape and Lily Luna, not right!) Anyway nice job very good story and nice take on Lily not wanting to join the order.

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Sweet, but a little disjointed. I kept thinking She was Lily, then it was Lily's mom. But I liked it!

Very very good! I feel like I was the person stuck in limbo, such was the quality of your writing. Poor Sev and Lily, how I truly wish that they had resolved their differences(

I loved it!