This is so weird but so pretty.

I loved the story, but I haven't really thought about this pairing.

Anyways, good work.

-Shyclueless

IruTema owns, and this story was so well written. I just couldn't stop reading it!

Well, why in the world is IrukaTemari fanfiction so nonexistent? It's so CUTE. I love both characters, and love them more together. You've given so much depth to the characters, and included a serious side along with all the humor and fluff. Temari needs a softer guy for once. She needs someone who makes her learn about herself, but doesn't make her feel the constant urge to compete. That's where Iruka comes in. :) Anyhow, thanks for writing such a beautiful portrayal of the couple.

Really deep and touching. I love it.

This pairing is love. and it needs more attention. Great writing, you had me hooked. Especially the last part, and Temari's conclusion and the kiss. and I loved-
“You. You are the best thing about me.” She grinned, before charging off in the direction of the gates. She rushed into the school laughing like a maniac, and the tinkling sound echoed down the empty corridors. It was six in the morning, school hadn't even started yet, and she had kissed the teacher. He would become the worst teacher ever, if he kept allowing things like that to happen. Somewhere behind her, she could hear him calling her name, but it didn't stop her dancing down the corridors.

Great story. Hope you write more.

inspired...temari and iruka are complete opposites on many levels making a great pairing. credible analysis of temari's philosophy and deep-down vulnerability.

This is really sweet! More please!

Are you keeping this as a oneshot or is there a chance that you can expand this?

Cheers!

Okay, I am giving you an original, straightforward review, because that is the type of person I am, the one who doesn't follow what everyone else says.

I thought how you wrapped around each lesson with another, each flashback, was cute. Yes, I said it, cute. Not the main language of the writing, but the dialogue. I could see a teacher, and their aide, speak that way. It was cute.

The pairing: A++? But I could be being biased...

The title: *sniffles* What happened to BOMBARDMENT? Did it become CHOPPED LIVER?

The summary: You're right, she wasn't good, she was great...

The theme: I believe this was protrayed well. The new one will be posted in November, I figure we pop out a new one every month, we should fill up this section fairly quick.

Um, sweetie, you uh, were the second to write one of this pairing on this website...Now, if you were talking about the first one written WELL, yes, you've got that hands down...damn, I didn't mean to burst your bubble either, but it would suck if you went to the archive and you saw it. I thought I should set you straight? Still doesn't make it better...*shakes head*

Okay, now all I need is :Your choice couple for a oneshot I need to write for you. 8D

DAC

Really good, I loved the pairing. :)

Really cute, the pairing is really sweet and I love it.

Really sweet, I love the pairing.

Really sweet, I love the pairing! Can't believe it's the only one on this sight so far though, that sucks.

Sweet!

I like this a lot! Guten work!

Such a cute pairing! I love it!