Bwahaha, I can see this happening, actually. Good one!

lool that was a brilliant story :D thankyou xx

Friggin' Great! xD

Great story!

I still won. Gah. That was a very good read, and a great ending. Poor Dean! and poor Sam too. Whumage all around. Loved it!

This was a great Halloween treat! Man, you just had to feel for both boys. Thank you so much for sharing!

Sigh! Why does it not surprise that a Winchester prank ends up the hospital? Those boys will never learn. (But the Nair prank never gets old. Hee.)

Love the transition from smartass Dean to guilty Dean, and Sam has attitude but it's very age appropriate. Great characterization of Bobby too.

And Dean calling Sam 'short fry' cracks me up - tempting the gods, methinks. :)

Yummy Halloween treat. Thanks!

Yay! A limpSam/angsty Dean fic! Thanks so much for the squee! I needed one today. I can so see this story happening...Dean wanting to freak his little brother out in a haunted house (great descriptions by the way) thinking it was safe "fun" for them both. Of course, our Winchesters don't usually enjoy safe fun do they. Loved the banter at the beginning, very brotherish. Enjoyed Dean's style...daring his little brother, not expecting trouble but being fully prepared for it by carrying his weapon. I love protective Dean..not taking any chances with his little bro...And then, how ironic, that by bringing the weapon his little bro got hurt. Great limpness descriptions. Great worried Dean. I enjoy your writing and hope to see you publish some more soon! Thanks for sharing your talents with us!

Wow, you sure made this one intense. Poured everything in it. Loved the Scary picture, that seemed to point to something supernatural. disappears and than the nightmare starts with Dean shooting his brother. I loved how Sam thought of Dean and insisted not to go to the hospital and also how Dean didn't care about any problems because all he cared about was Sam. Once again you did an awesome job with the emotions. Dean sitting in the waiting room and not really knowing what he was saying. Not remembering that he had the nurse call Bobby. Sam waking up and struggling to remember, knowing Dean should be by his side. I sure felt like I was right there, feeling what they felt. Again, great job. Hugs, Vonnie

Awesome story! Poor boys! they can't even have a normal Halloween. Figured Sammy would try to scare Dean but didn't even think about Dean having a gun. Glad he was able to pull the shot.
Loved Dean having the nurse call Bobby instead of John. Can just imagine what John would have done.
Oh and Sammy's right. He definitely won that round. :)

Lisa

Tis great!

Ames, I loved this. Only Dean and Sam could find trouble doing something simple that all kids do, poking around a spooky old house. Poor Dean was out of his mind w/fear and guilt. Sam was feeling some of that too I'd bet. Not a good idea what he did. But he's young. He forgot Dean is always armed. And Bobby showed up. :D Thank goodness for that. The boys could use a little backup. Lol. Prank war indeed.

*lol*

This's just mean. Shot over a prank. I'm sure they'll appreciate the irony ... some day. At least when they aren't grounded anymore. Which would be in a billion years.

Aw, Dean shot Sammy. Why does that appeal to me? Thanks for a nice little one-shot. Back to the Hunt, now, though - Sam is in need of TLC over there.

Dude!! You made Dean shoot Sam! That is so worse that cheating on tickets for the movie theater... :P

Ok, I gotta admit at first I was a little sceptical that Dean would slip like that, but then again it'd be unrealistic to assume he always had things under control... I need to remember that he's not perfect lol.

So - this was a really cool story! I didn't see the shot coming at all... I was expecting a good old monster in that house :) Nice twist to have Dean be the source of the limp instead of something supernatural on halloween.

And and extra point for the reference to the prank war. *grin*