What a great story - thank you for writing it! I love John and Rodney's banter and their relationship, you give them great voice. Love the infirmary scene especially, Rodney's drool - we've seen that a time or two! Makes me miss them but glad to have a great story like this to put a smile on my face!

Oh thank you so much for this story, I simply loved it! It was so adorable ending, the two of them threatening each other like young brothers! And it was great that you made Rodney the hero of this story and Sheppard was the one that needed help. And you put really life into their roles, I could actually picture them while reading it...

I am looking forward to read more from you :-)

glad the kid was ok sheppard would have never forgiven himself if she wouldnt have made it. :)

I really enjoyed your story (apart from Shep being injured of course ... no one really enjoys that!). Everyone felt in character and I especially liked all of Rodney's complaints despite how hard he was working to save John. The ending with the demand for deserts was classic. Well done!