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Reviews for: Oro's First Time
xXxDarkAnimeAngelxXx
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Thank you!! That was great, I didn't just laugh like "a hyena on crack", I went into hysterics. That's definitley made my day!
Chromde
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
Haha, oh god this was perfect! So damn funny! Poor Jiraiya, imagine how TRAUMATIZING that would be. xD
Mata
2009-01-26 . chapter 1
This was really good! I had to laugh at the end, can't believe that Oro slept with Jiraiya's professor! Great job!
fiore777
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
I love you! I love how you showed Jiraiya's thirst for knowledge. Hearing Orochimaru was the one who encouraged Jiraiya on made me really happy. Your version of the Gallant Tale of Jiraiya sounds like something I would read. xD How perfect it is that they encouraged each other into different...creative endeavors.
hieilover135
2008-11-07 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, this made me lol so much! I wonder if jiraiya would've guessed that Oro would've ended up being a man-whore (lol)!

Awesome story as usual!
chibibaka1
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
Brilliant. I loved this so much! Oro is such a man-whore and everyone--himself included--knows it XD Great setting also! I liked how you described the writing process in the beginning, and kudos for the clever use of Jiraiya Goketsu Monogatari. Yay for Konoha Corps! I have to go and read your next A Day in the Life chapter now ^^ Thanks for posting another awesome fic, as always. I'm sure Oro would be very happy.
NayanRoo
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
/insert evil cackle here!/

I think I've upset the people around me in the student lounge by my suppressed giggling and the snorting of tea up my nose at Jiraiya going HOLY SHIT. It burns, but oh, it is a good burn.

Oro can do nothing by halves, I think... he wants sex? He's going to /get sex/, dammit.

Jiraiya's description of his creative writing group sounds suspiciously like most of the students at my university.
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