Don't Look Under the Bed has always been one of my favorite movies! But NOTHING beats the Labyrinth...except Sarah of course.

Thanks for the entertaining read.

Sonofabitch. I had a nice long review fucking typed and now I can't even remember what it all said, but your passage in the last chapter, I forgot to mention when reviewing, that started with flying with dragons was absolutely FABULOUS. Like, take-my-breath-away beyond-the-boundaries-of-one-story amazing, with that wonder of an author who has weaved magic into the very words and I applaud you wondrously for it.

As for this chapter, that was a very cute ending though I'm still a little wary of how odd the story was. I hope you get bored someday and make a sequel of sorts!
- Kat

That's so awful! I mean...she shouldn't CONDEMN the town but...BURNING? That's one of the WORST ways to die...
Dearie, you've hooked me on a story that to be truthful I thought was a joke. You're beyond cruel!
- Kat

Wow what a jerk. But oddly amusing. I mean, of all ways to bother someone, braiding their hair? Really? Well, it did make me sort of laugh in a bemused sort of wayish. You're just sort of confounding me with this story and I don't know why, because it seems like you're trying to make it simple. Uffgh. I'll just have to finish now, won't I?
- Kat

Not going to lie, Mary Poppins was a little weird. Especially considering I watched it about a week ago. That movie cracks me up and I don't know why, but most movies tend to touch me(not like that if you're dirty) but yeah anyway, GOOD JOB so far, and hmm I like the dress change but that's just me so but I'm sure others do too. Really good little introduction there, even if it does portray him as slightly psychopathic. Loved the 'you're molesting me', made me laugh so much! XD
- Kat

You had to do it, didn't you?
I mean, I EXPECTED Jareth to be the bogeyman the way you were setting this up, but he has to be some sort of evil creeper too? I mean really, how many emotional knots will you twist me into during one day? I suppose some of it may be my fault though, spending more than half of a Saturday reading your stories... Anyway besides the fact that I apparently have no life today, I'm going to continue and so far as I remember, 'Don't Look Under the Bed' had a happy ending, with everything working out after that weird bogey-world thing, so I'll hope this does too...
- Kat

Hmm that sounds pretty good. XD
Somehow 'Bogey' sounds distinctly un-French,
but who cares? It's a very gaggy language.
(Not to be offensive if you like it.)
While I AM still waiting on your other fic,
I must say that this has caught my attention.
And really makes me yearn that it was NOT
winter holidays approaching BUT what can I do?
Good job so far!
- Kat

aw...I really like it! any chance you'll do a continuation of it?

Wow, awesome job, I love the conclusion, and how well the plot flowed through this whole thing! Poor Jareth, I was really worried for him for a sec. Having him trapped and dictated by a book is such an interesting and original idea. Great job on that, and this particular portrayal of him in general. I look forward to any other Labyrinth fic you write, whether they are similar to this, or perhaps even its sequel. Good luck on future writings! :)
~Sapphire

Wow, great job on describing Jareth's stance on things, I love the idea of him coming out of a book to haunt 10-yr olds. And I really loved the line, "You crave fantasy and I crave humanity." Very deep, I never saw that contrast in them before. Great job on this, especially the details and writing style. :)
~Sapphire

Wow, nice chapter. I love the horror-esque feel of it. Nice job, I'm lookng forward to what Jareth does next. :)
~Sapphire

o.o I love this story...

Didn't think I would like it so much when I first started reading it - and I do faintly remember the movie "Don't Look Under the Bed". I know for a fact I watched it, but the actual contents is a bit iffy.

Anyway, nice. I like the ending. It's a good place to stop, even if Jareth and Sarah didn't get together. *pouts*

I also liked how you answered all the important questions - like anything really tied to the book. Good job. I had no questions at the end, other then what happens next.

Sequel?

Sequal?

Oh! this is begging, nay, CRYING out for a sqeuel, how they live, how they work togeather, this was written so well, so amazingly, and so in charter for Jareth and Sarah, it's truely wonderful, truely! I ador this story, it's brillent :D