It replaces the supernatural with the technological as the power for the 'he/she is alive!' cliche found here...but I think this is great! Though Rodney and Doc Keller? Wow...gotta start watching SGA a lot more to get even the squintiest ability to imagine ;)

Complete? What do you mean complete? Elizabeth is still out there and he didn't actually promise her he wouldn't go looking for her. I really liked this and totally think it should be extended to a longer story!

yay that would be so good if she is alive... Atlantis needs Carson and Liz :(

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Very nice firefly! any chance of a sequel? cause i loved it.

one note -

"He knows that it’s not normal and that he should be there, "

did you mean "and that he *shouldn't* be there"?