I want to kill you, deary. *death glare*
How the HECK could Kai be dragged like this without fighting? How the HECK can you keel you own OC?! T.T
Your evil, but we still love your stories, don't we? ;3

Heya Mika here, I have now finished reading your prequels to 'Friend or Foe' and I have to say that they were utterly amazing and that I totally enjoyed my time reading them. I love how you portrayed the characters and also I liked Tari. I have also read the first two chapters of the 'Friend or Foe' fic and am really enjoying them as well but I am a little confused as to how Kai and Tari's father came back into the picture, when did he show up again and when did they move back in with them?? Anyways keep up the fantastic work and please update you fic soon. XXMikaXX

Great Ending for the story

o whoa, that is suchh a cute end. great story *claps*
anyway so Tari did go along with Tala right?

good luck with the new one

I liked Tyson and Robert's battle. Well done on the rocks-in-the-twister thing.
Hehe, Aofie learnt how great a team Tari and Spiked Tiger are, great battle.
Tyson and the guys partying loudly, typical but can't blame them. World Champions again, hehe.
Bryan making comments, will he never change? Ah poor shrimp, he kept quite for once, did Bryan put a sock on his head? lol
And so cute with Tala protecting Tari from now on, doesn't mean Kai's backing off, lol.
And so cute ending, having Tala carry Tari out of the room.

I can't wait for Part 3 to come out, hehe.

good chappy.

Awesome chapter. I loved the battles, as good as always. Kai vs. Johnny was fantastic, of course Kai would win that, he had no choice really, but well, lol.

Great finals, can't wait for the finale. ^^

its great how Tala told Tari how he felt about her hehe

Great Story

Okay it's official I'm jealous of Tari. I mean I wish my brother was like Kai, that would be awesome because my brother's a jerk >_>. But I'm happy for her and Tala and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great job Smiffy! :D

I liked how Tari had her nightmare, it was obvious she would do, poor her.

I liked how she and Kai trained together, she does well then Tala interrupts with the worrying side, don't blame him though hehe.

Yay, the lovebirds are finally together, I mean, about time, lol. It's been what, 8-9 years.

And typical Tari, battle 5 great bladers, well, make that 3 and 2 extra wannabes, lol. But she won, cool idea having her be slightly too weak to finish Kai.

And good on Hiro letting her battle and yeah, happy Tala has his girl at last, lol

Can't wait for your update.

whoa...

Wow, that was an amazing chapter. I cant wait to read the next one!^^

Oh my... I nearly cried during this chapter, it was so... so... happy yet sad at the same time TT-TT but on a happier note SUPER TALA AND HIS SIDEKICK COLONEL SARCASTIC TO THE RESCUE!! Boy I love sarcastic Bryan. I can't wait for the next chapter, great job Smiffy!

Mean Hiro. Being in Biovolt doesn't mean they will always be a member, I mean, come on.

And I liked Kai trying to help Tari. What a caring brother, aw.

And evil Voltaire, considering killing his own grandchildren like he killed his daughter-in-law.

Go BBA, capturing Voltaire, why didn't they kill him? They were armed, lol.

Nice one Tala, calling Boris a twisted freak, lol. Go you, hehe. Carrying Tari out was cute as well.

And Kai's surprise, Tari isn't calling Voltaire grandfather anymore. Good on her and good on Kai comforting her. That was very cute and loving that he stayed with her. aww.

Awesome chapter and update soon please.