I'd commend you on your poems; I don't have the patience to write them. Your fic shows both POVs, and I think that's good (:

Do keep a lookout for the very occasional spelling error [though sometimes the keyboard just doesn't obey] like the word "scent" but other than that, the spelling and grammar are fine, too.

If you want to check up on more poems, I recommend the website . They feature many poets and many many poems, so you can read up and see how free verse works.

P.S. I digress: In response to your review on my fic, I realised that I'm not really going anywhere. I'll take a break for now and think on what my main storyline is. Thanks for reviewing!

I really like this third one. Hades reminds me of a horny teenager who doesn't know what to do when faced with the girl of his dreams. I love how he questions himself at the end and clearly just wants to please her. I like your poems a lot! Please continue!

The persephone poem is really gorgeous, I love how you made it rhyme too ^^

its kind of sad she thinks he only wants her body when he so obviously loves her T_T

was this a one shot or will you continue?

wow i like

apollymi