♥ Great. Please update soon. I can tell this is going to be really, really good.

OH! This is really awesome! I couldn't stop reading for one moment! I was hooked!! This is really awesome! I love this! Man, oh, man! I loved how Roxas was scared in the beginning of his visit and then he slowly became more and more brave. I really love the ending! That last line is just way too awesome! I really hope that you update this again soon!

MORE! I REQUIRE MORE! It's amazing it made my chest restrict in a funny way and I could just picture everything, i enjoyed it and I really do hope that ou continue with this master piece.

Dear lord, I swear this is going to become one of the greatest AkuRoku stories I've ever read. I can just feel it. My friend told me about this and now you have me hooked.

Something about this story screams vampire, and I'm starting to wonder...but I'll keep my thoughts to myself because I want to see where you take this. PLEASE don't stop writing, I beg of you! Or else I will hunt you down because very rarely do I take interest in a fic anymore!!

Did I mention I love your writing style? ^^ I'm loving this, so keep it coming my dear.

~MISS KISS

This story has an amazing start, please continue writing it>.<
The last scene with Axel is... wow.
I'm speechless.
Keep it up?
Nora
ps: sorry for the scattered review...

I don't review stories very much anymore, but this was such a pleasant surprise I thought it really deserved one!

It's not often you find stories set outside of modern times, and this one really impressed me. You wrote the setting really well, even for a short stretch of writing, just little hints in the atmosphere and dialogue style, like the fact that one of the first things Roxas wonders is whether Axel has servants, and how strange it would be if he didn't; it's all very clever and fits perfectly. Especially things like the cross around Roxas's neck -- genius. The period difference is there, but it's not exaggerated either, and the characters are still themselves!

LOVING the last names. Most of the time last names just kind of ruin a story for me, but for probably the first time I feel like they actually fit. WELL DONE.

I feel like I should say more, but I think you get the idea. XD I loved it, and I really hope you continue this because it feels like something so fresh! Awesome idea, and great writing! Update? :D

~~Racc48

i wanna read more :)

Oh God, pelase please continue this story! xDD

Oh my, Axel's a devil? Awesome o.o

>:( ...Damn you for stopping it there. You hate us, don't you? UGH!! -pulls out hair-

That was excellent/awesome/amazing/thrilling/alluring/sexy/eerie/accurate/in-character/lovely/SOFRICKIN'COOL!

Pick an adjective. You get the picture??

Ugh. I ENVY your talent. You are amazing. -worships feet-

...I am seriously speechless. Sorry!

All I want to say is...WRITE MORE! NOW! ...please?

This is a excellent story. Good job!!

I LOVE this story. The storyline is pretty unique and gets my dying for more!

Oh, I hope you continue this, it's absolutely delightful. Your descriptions are wonderful, I love the characterisation and the setting is perfect. This is really a great, very creative piece.

OH MAN! dude, you've taken like EVERYTHING I love in a story and rolled it all into one! the setting in the 1800's, evil rumors, a demonic man, and best of all, Akuroku! lol XD seriously though, this story is just amazing! I was really pulled into in the beginning, and you just kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time! I love how you've made Axel, all evilly persuasive. That kind of personality always seems to fit him better than lovable jerk lol. And you use the concept of mystery so well too, because the reader is given almost no information actually about Axel, except the information from the rumors. Also. I LOVE the last names! Oh wow, they just toally made me think "yes, that is so perfect". And also that it's set in London is a nice change too. The story name is also nicely fitting. I'm seeming to like your writing...I've only read a couple of stories, but your word use is amazing, and I'm such a sucker for stories set in older times.

I really hope you continu this story! Really, it's so captivating!And...I'm also adding you to my fav Authors list now XD

I'm so glad this isn't a one-shot! I'm already hooked! I love how the intro sets the scene, it's highly informative and cute. The last names are so delightfully British, they go very well with the first names. Their meeting was fantastically orchestrated- it's irony and seems to be pure chance. The scarf was a smooth move, assuming that it was intentional on Axel's part- which was what I was getting. The inclusion of Lexaeus was a pleasant surprise, he makes a very good manservant, and a very foreboding one. The dialogue throughout the whole piece was emotionally-charged, fluid, and charming in a distinctly period way. This is amazing! I love it. Incredibly well done!

Have a Great Day.